tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post1391904489925642934..comments2023-09-26T16:26:20.276+05:30Comments on delhidreams: its been so long / बहुत दिन हुए अबdelhidreamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04613041484425960760noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-31605359520820843452010-01-27T12:45:37.077+05:302010-01-27T12:45:37.077+05:30bahut sundar likha hai adee :)bahut sundar likha hai adee :)baavrivitihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05694400635981955189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-85508248892796852192009-11-17T03:03:28.317+05:302009-11-17T03:03:28.317+05:30lovely poem... full of renewal and yet also full o...lovely poem... full of renewal and yet also full of sadness and apprehension... draws me in... thanks for sharingJonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07415555531504843017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-55734089424169047822009-11-09T19:21:38.009+05:302009-11-09T19:21:38.009+05:30समझ नहीं आता की ये ख़ुदा किससे नाराज़ है,
मैं जो त...समझ नहीं आता की ये ख़ुदा किससे नाराज़ है,<br />मैं जो तेरे इश्क में उसे भूल गया हूँ या जो तू उसे भूल मुझ से इश्क करने लगी है<br />चाहे जो भी हो, इस इश्के-ऐ -रश्क में सितम वो मुझ पर ढाकर, खुद इंसान-सा होता जा रहा हैbankebiharihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12638454720147906083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-42127532576665744872009-11-08T14:21:27.139+05:302009-11-08T14:21:27.139+05:30bahut sundar :)
englih lang mein woh maza nahin j...bahut sundar :)<br /><br />englih lang mein woh maza nahin jo hindi ki khoobsoorti mein hai...<br /><br />= richinsane freakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03566780245650816554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-18460764132254585582009-11-08T00:34:54.035+05:302009-11-08T00:34:54.035+05:30Adee! I knew you must be an artist. Now I see! I L...Adee! I knew you must be an artist. Now I see! I LOVE your poetry. So glad you gave me a link. I'll be following this site. You are such a great soul.<br /><br />Antonia Lindsey<br />Artimentary Studios<br />http://artimentarystudios.blogspot.com<br />http://artimentary.artfire.com<br />http://twitter.artimentary.comantonia lindseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09067311558579416566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-51386709238084280912009-11-07T22:47:50.759+05:302009-11-07T22:47:50.759+05:30behad khoobsurat thi yeh kavitabehad khoobsurat thi yeh kavitavebhutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349642868484517232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-25603096391403322462009-11-07T14:40:30.242+05:302009-11-07T14:40:30.242+05:30The original reads better than the translation.......The original reads better than the translation.... but I guess that is to be expected...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16953788167636698842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-56515062008742523372009-11-07T07:39:36.774+05:302009-11-07T07:39:36.774+05:30very very nice, one of these days i'll have to...very very nice, one of these days i'll have to set one of your poems to musicUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15724702172443959835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-76529758722788087922009-11-06T22:47:21.430+05:302009-11-06T22:47:21.430+05:30Aree waah Adee to likhta bhi achcha hai ;) Keep wr...Aree waah Adee to likhta bhi achcha hai ;) Keep writing loved it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-56769911980196426562009-11-06T16:23:26.363+05:302009-11-06T16:23:26.363+05:30nice translation.. :)nice translation.. :)mageshcsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01360643859921722020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-22212201688840661452009-11-06T12:51:41.848+05:302009-11-06T12:51:41.848+05:30very beautiful poem adi :)
keep it goingvery beautiful poem adi :)<br />keep it goingniharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05325494998369993761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-83461121124291265592009-11-06T10:54:51.738+05:302009-11-06T10:54:51.738+05:30sudeep: thanks. as for the image, u shud assume wh...sudeep: thanks. as for the image, u shud assume who this cud be :)<br /><br />sudhu: shukriya. nahi, it won't take long this time. hopefully. and believe me when i say, i really really hate farmville! all my frnds r addctd to it nw :(<br /><br />bhavna: hehe :) yes, i will write more often. and what you post in ur blog is nthng less thn poetry *hugs*<br /><br />vivek: welcome to delhidreams :)<br /><br />melody: aha! look who is here :) we love u too lizie *hugs*<br /><br />sigma: thanks. don't wrry, thr r othr ways that i can stay in touch with u :)delhidreamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04613041484425960760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-46896028951158700472009-11-06T10:35:01.392+05:302009-11-06T10:35:01.392+05:30Lovely, and very soulful. Do write more often, Adi...Lovely, and very soulful. Do write more often, Adi.<br /><br />Bahut din hue ab blogger par login nahin kiya maine ;-)Sigmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08300547373292021313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-20160548066364481612009-11-06T10:32:56.876+05:302009-11-06T10:32:56.876+05:30awesome poem and poem se bhi achhi dee ki pic... ...awesome poem and poem se bhi achhi dee ki pic... :) love you both... :)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11536620123286630162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-44850111811557280762009-11-06T10:17:49.085+05:302009-11-06T10:17:49.085+05:30superb bro......one of the most deep meaning &...superb bro......one of the most deep meaning & the best thoughts i'v come across....<br /><br />keep smiling.......Vivek Gautamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13518198743887227912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-20661023875069228182009-11-06T09:57:48.982+05:302009-11-06T09:57:48.982+05:30Bahut din huye ab
Adee ne nayi kavita likhi
Aur ja...Bahut din huye ab<br />Adee ne nayi kavita likhi<br />Aur jab likhi<br />To bahut khoobsurat likhi<br /><br />:)<br /><br />my poor attempt at poetry...just shows how you should write often, more often!Bhavna Bhatnagarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10560024561258953678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-3872602094670273712009-11-05T23:58:28.587+05:302009-11-05T23:58:28.587+05:30Ah! What a lovely poem of hope this one! Bahut din...Ah! What a lovely poem of hope this one! Bahut din hue ab, hindi mein kavita padhkar! Dil khush ho gaya. Ab aur bahut din mat guzaarna dusri kavitaaon ke liye.<br />Waise 2nd stanza padkhar lag raha hai Farmville ka bahut asar hua hai :P<br /><br />SudhamshuSudhamshuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03339258601641600918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-72714313026407919342009-11-05T20:38:42.470+05:302009-11-05T20:38:42.470+05:30nice image...
and yet another beautiful poem...nice image... <br />and yet another beautiful poem...Sudeep Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04457246949268602320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-76260200835670992772009-11-05T18:06:49.418+05:302009-11-05T18:06:49.418+05:30harshita: haha kam shabdon mein hi to baat badi ho...harshita: haha kam shabdon mein hi to baat badi hoti hai :)<br /><br />magesh: thanks!<br /><br />hipp hopper: hehe, ye naam kab se rakh liya bro? thnks for vstng :)<br /><br />kushal: thanks for the feedback bro. will sure keep writing. it is the lifeline :)<br /><br />amarendra: thanks sir!<br /><br />howdy: but u still havnt given me my translation :(delhidreamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04613041484425960760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-586761675044780992009-11-05T01:16:05.303+05:302009-11-05T01:16:05.303+05:30see, i was not hte only one missing ur posts.. :-)...see, i was not hte only one missing ur posts.. :-)How do we knowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01763488475931737293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-19063823345086832972009-11-05T00:02:39.546+05:302009-11-05T00:02:39.546+05:30Yes, buddy!
अब नहीं, अब नहीं
बहुत दिन हो गए अब
T...Yes, buddy!<br /><br />अब नहीं, अब नहीं<br />बहुत दिन हो गए अब<br /><br />Thanks for striking the chords!Amarendrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14962516983248107277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-6577910343424054672009-11-04T21:38:07.896+05:302009-11-04T21:38:07.896+05:30aah.. touche! indeed one of the most gracefully in...aah.. touche! indeed one of the most gracefully intense lines I've read so far. I fear other poems wud be perceived as bland after reading this. ;)<br /><br />keep on writing bro..Kushalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01722140480153269592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-45770474181820730272009-11-04T19:29:05.052+05:302009-11-04T19:29:05.052+05:30hmmmm sach mein bahut din ho gaye zindagi jiye :-)...hmmmm sach mein bahut din ho gaye zindagi jiye :-)Vivekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12493528541959847825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-50375467826934384732009-11-04T19:17:57.808+05:302009-11-04T19:17:57.808+05:30nice one :)nice one :)mageshcsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01360643859921722020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-54962930728526717572009-11-04T19:01:51.075+05:302009-11-04T19:01:51.075+05:30behad khoobsurat.....mashaallah...aur kya kahein.....behad khoobsurat.....mashaallah...aur kya kahein...tareef ke liye shabd kam ahin humare pass... :)harshita shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08161425021528790396noreply@blogger.com