tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post1433636424282529771..comments2023-09-26T16:26:20.276+05:30Comments on delhidreams: kahanidelhidreamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04613041484425960760noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-43204034687461894172010-01-08T12:08:29.195+05:302010-01-08T12:08:29.195+05:30Beautiful, too beautiful.
With all the pain of str...Beautiful, too beautiful.<br />With all the pain of struggle called life.Sigmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08300547373292021313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-16466574878628597632010-01-03T21:45:00.773+05:302010-01-03T21:45:00.773+05:30What the world needs now, is translation. :)
I w...What the world needs now, is translation. :)<br /><br />I will give you my love and support regardless, I'm sure the poem is great! xoGillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08845512494417503198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-70271860163692535982009-12-26T02:17:50.248+05:302009-12-26T02:17:50.248+05:30Beautiful little piece!Beautiful little piece!Amandeep Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06436485828898738823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-86698810235916956852009-12-23T17:02:54.339+05:302009-12-23T17:02:54.339+05:30very very nice lines alok, small in size but very ...very very nice lines alok, small in size but very deep inside....u have matured enough as a writer, keep it up. My best wishes are alwayz with u.neersarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12532578713396952163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-44995159277540393182009-12-17T17:57:24.998+05:302009-12-17T17:57:24.998+05:30maharaj.. shaam ho gayi.. post dikhayi nahi deti.....maharaj.. shaam ho gayi.. post dikhayi nahi deti.... pichhli baar us nazm ko phone kiya tha to keh rahi thi "Kaun disa mein le ke chala re batohiya... ae thehar thehar, ye suhaani si dagar.. zara dekhan de..."How do we knowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01763488475931737293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-6699921828954020022009-12-16T17:34:17.902+05:302009-12-16T17:34:17.902+05:30Adee it's simplicity is its beauty. loved it. ...Adee it's simplicity is its beauty. loved it. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-60708009719312974292009-12-16T15:31:24.483+05:302009-12-16T15:31:24.483+05:30i am speechless.....
every word contains a synops...i am speechless.....<br /><br />every word contains a synopsis of the different facets of life.....<br /><br />kudos bro.....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17150975314184346025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-84335994376485432482009-12-15T22:39:04.351+05:302009-12-15T22:39:04.351+05:30Kalpana kavi ki
Khayal khuda ka
Khwab hai ya
ha...Kalpana kavi ki <br />Khayal khuda ka <br />Khwab hai ya <br />haqueeqat<br />Kho gaye hum <br />Dekha jo inme jannant <br />ki jhalakVijihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14238730436295766322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-87497926584691621852009-12-15T21:58:47.453+05:302009-12-15T21:58:47.453+05:30its beautiful!! I love it! especially the paradoxi...its beautiful!! I love it! especially the paradoxical part. its lovely.<br /><br />- amritaBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18411697702687310877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-91754668695771536292009-12-15T15:05:48.094+05:302009-12-15T15:05:48.094+05:30It's beautiful. A simple yet powerful poem for...It's beautiful. A simple yet powerful poem for a simple yet hardworking man. One more to the kitty of the amazing poems by you. :-)Pallavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02369455223114299039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-90014880781258148612009-12-14T11:39:09.005+05:302009-12-14T11:39:09.005+05:30masha allah!masha allah!eklachalbehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06949685702217279052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-10225613371618175322009-12-14T09:17:14.965+05:302009-12-14T09:17:14.965+05:30okay, must learn Hindi, must learn Hindi....xoxxookay, must learn Hindi, must learn Hindi....xoxxoGillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08845512494417503198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-29291510780646774002009-12-12T20:01:07.208+05:302009-12-12T20:01:07.208+05:30Every couplet signifies a struggle, a contradictio...Every couplet signifies a struggle, a contradiction; the last one being the climax; a chimera!?Aman Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18418339872235743433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-65389558237630330562009-12-12T01:25:20.332+05:302009-12-12T01:25:20.332+05:30its simple and good (though i understood only litt...its simple and good (though i understood only little) :)mageshcsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01360643859921722020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-67758112524968339282009-12-11T19:41:21.122+05:302009-12-11T19:41:21.122+05:30Hi man,
Beautiful writing. I am no authority to j...Hi man,<br /><br />Beautiful writing. I am no authority to judge poetry or prose but my definition of beauty in writing is that which stirs something in me.<br /><br />Reading your lines, each couplet told a story to me. I couldn't resist the temptation and hence, took the liberty of writing this inspired by your lines :<br /><br />dehaadi mazdoor ki<br />woh odhne ki chaadar<br />jhankte jisse<br />do nange pair<br />poochte ek masoom sawaal<br />kya yehi hai<br />nateeja<br />khoon paseene ka?<br /><br />bigda hi sahi beta<br />khoon hai apna<br />maa ki mamta<br />maa hi jaane<br />jise rakha nau <br />mahine kok mein<br />karun alag kaise<br />tukda seene ka?<br /><br />bachhon ki zidd<br />ka darr hai mujhko<br />woh maali hi kya<br />jo phool na seenche<br />roz hun ginta<br />baaki ke din<br />kab aayega<br />ant maheene ka?<br /><br />raat ki dibbi<br />pe chandi ke taare<br />pet kaat kar<br />sajaaye hain<br />badr ki tasveer<br />nahi hai mumkin<br />kaise banaun<br />chaand meene ka?<br /><br />gam ho saaki<br />to piyun khushi se<br />pyaala bhar bhar<br />ashru ka<br />dard na ho<br />seene mein jab tak<br />kahaan hai<br />mazaa peene ka?<br /><br />keechad mein kamal<br />nahi chahta rehna<br />jaakar keh do <br />kaviyon se<br />mukh ho sundar<br />ragon mein kalak<br />ye kaisa<br />falsafaa jeene ka?<br /><br />khudaa kaashi ka<br />ilm na kehte<br />kehte khudaa<br />ke bande<br />kaagaz kalam <br />na jaanein mazhab<br />kyun na ho<br />raam madeene ka?<br /><br />Please don't mind and thanks again for such lovely lines.Varunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12067888500323801313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-41418672324085084852009-12-11T11:26:58.273+05:302009-12-11T11:26:58.273+05:30Sir ji Salute..
Its wonderful, with some amazing ...Sir ji Salute.. <br />Its wonderful, with some amazing amazing hindi vocab....the ease with which u let ur words do the talking its astounding.. <br />I guess a eng translation probably will not justify the overall feeling which its is able to generate...<br /><br />Amazing stuff....Saurangshu Kanunjnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17810542602167849728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-45963412115621335382009-12-11T01:39:21.927+05:302009-12-11T01:39:21.927+05:30hmmm... smooth...
should have gotten introduced t...hmmm... smooth...<br /><br />should have gotten introduced to the likes of such works when i was a kid...Sudeep Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04457246949268602320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-88286221049782915952009-12-10T22:20:49.619+05:302009-12-10T22:20:49.619+05:30so lyrical...isko kissi music director ko de doo.....so lyrical...isko kissi music director ko de doo..you will be in contention of best song for next year's filmfare :)rahul anandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17566660214584454635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-86101564130164530772009-12-10T21:12:56.762+05:302009-12-10T21:12:56.762+05:30Taaaleeeyaaan :)Taaaleeeyaaan :)Richahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14382252401380787038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-24744619173133773532009-12-10T19:02:46.296+05:302009-12-10T19:02:46.296+05:30Sheer genius... mere liye ab tum hi gulzar ho.... ...Sheer genius... mere liye ab tum hi gulzar ho.... brilliantVivekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12493528541959847825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-67357135053200259932009-12-10T18:33:40.358+05:302009-12-10T18:33:40.358+05:30simple yet striking.
Loved reading it.simple yet striking.<br /><br />Loved reading it.Umananda Kalitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02113436733630588022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-27897277123342600782009-12-10T18:32:26.027+05:302009-12-10T18:32:26.027+05:30wah wah!!wah wah!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-23591284023923100592009-12-10T17:53:24.355+05:302009-12-10T17:53:24.355+05:30waah waah, waah waah. mai jitnaa likhu yaha is poe...waah waah, waah waah. mai jitnaa likhu yaha is poem ki taarif me, wo utnaa hi kam hogaa. bas samajh lo ki itni kam paktiyo me, kya andaaz hai pirone ka.Omkaaraahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04250834038020305785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-75589174804163338102009-12-10T17:33:02.598+05:302009-12-10T17:33:02.598+05:30" गम हो साकी^
मज़ा पीने का....
खुदा काशी का..." गम हो साकी^<br />मज़ा पीने का.... <br /><br />खुदा काशी का<br />राम मदीने^* का"<br /><br />Beautiful beautiful poem!<br /><br />@tantanoo<br /><br />*and please, no english translations. The structure is so u nique*NotFunnyNotFamoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03311769539477246389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-44618163853073012952009-12-10T17:21:07.100+05:302009-12-10T17:21:07.100+05:30good one bro;good one bro;anixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11287777342448504124noreply@blogger.com