tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post1755453291682774208..comments2023-09-26T16:26:20.276+05:30Comments on delhidreams: this city / ye shehardelhidreamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04613041484425960760noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-25605760352256831432009-12-03T10:03:53.209+05:302009-12-03T10:03:53.209+05:30real impactful.. especially the last line.
PS: Is...real impactful.. especially the last line.<br /><br />PS: Is there some rule on the number of syllables in a line for ghazals that make all lines sound so much in sync with each other??Diveshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03199525318560734147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-66159151852441763792009-12-01T07:32:27.813+05:302009-12-01T07:32:27.813+05:30nice poem here...
so subtle and yet so sharp...
...nice poem here...<br /><br />so subtle and yet so sharp...<br /><br />and i'll agree with your other commenters on the last line... quite a hook for a re-read!<br /><br />thanks for sharing your work, as always...Jonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07415555531504843017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-70553315199131153442009-11-28T20:29:11.312+05:302009-11-28T20:29:11.312+05:30beautifully written - both versions.beautifully written - both versions.pink dogwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00938574807898718022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-41257320980256364472009-11-28T11:58:43.149+05:302009-11-28T11:58:43.149+05:30good one adee...good one adee...anixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11287777342448504124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-86978320151925876272009-11-28T06:15:19.348+05:302009-11-28T06:15:19.348+05:30this is cool :) really.
i like the last line a lot...this is cool :) really.<br />i like the last line a lot.Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18411697702687310877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-52131040458485427602009-11-28T05:58:32.101+05:302009-11-28T05:58:32.101+05:30oh mY GOD!!!!!
Sorry...but this was amazing. Sim...oh mY GOD!!!!!<br /> Sorry...but this was amazing. Simply amazing. Well written Adee. xoxoGillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08845512494417503198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-31925423973442673252009-11-27T19:48:26.519+05:302009-11-27T19:48:26.519+05:30loved the ending...
eternal gloss... instead of et...loved the ending...<br />eternal gloss... instead of eternal bliss, eh?<br /><br />so true!human beinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232419187783429903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-21579738138089466912009-11-27T17:20:57.775+05:302009-11-27T17:20:57.775+05:30Your best. And I'm amazed.
Keep inking. Keep ...Your best. And I'm amazed. <br />Keep inking. Keep rocking!!Umananda Kalitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02113436733630588022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-70735054651381232652009-11-27T15:48:56.191+05:302009-11-27T15:48:56.191+05:30Nice....Nice....Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16261982773389640993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-9922195144274666302009-11-27T14:49:40.737+05:302009-11-27T14:49:40.737+05:30deep.. deep. deep.
:) class.
i like your conno...deep.. deep. deep. <br /><br />:) class. <br /><br />i like your connotations and analogies.Harishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12609011423304441643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-78690506612003991752009-11-27T13:23:55.756+05:302009-11-27T13:23:55.756+05:30love the last line...such an apt ending to a beaut...love the last line...such an apt ending to a beautiful poemBhavna Bhatnagarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10560024561258953678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-3009294722157533032009-11-27T13:06:42.404+05:302009-11-27T13:06:42.404+05:30This is simply superb BB.... :-)
Keep writing...This is simply superb BB.... :-)<br /><br />Keep writing...Prakash Phttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02104340732064898215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-53397739241574057492009-11-26T12:54:58.523+05:302009-11-26T12:54:58.523+05:30Great job! Well done Adee :)Great job! Well done Adee :)Krithikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13344633974219232971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-67160492075578419302009-11-26T10:02:25.565+05:302009-11-26T10:02:25.565+05:30marvellous.....a food for thought......a step towa...marvellous.....a food for thought......a step towards self realization.....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17150975314184346025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-40608502637059548122009-11-26T06:02:54.746+05:302009-11-26T06:02:54.746+05:30What a beautiful poem and so true! This poem refle...What a beautiful poem and so true! This poem reflects what goes on in Delhi.<br /><br />Enjoyed it. Thank you.<br /><br />Dr Yadu Singh/Sydney<br />www.yadusingh.wordpress.com<br />www.twitter.com/dryadusinghUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11816071033474097165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-79326028320001271822009-11-25T23:37:21.621+05:302009-11-25T23:37:21.621+05:30Lovely writing mate !Lovely writing mate !Vinayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10074864977803068599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-13611477328212159362009-11-25T20:36:46.708+05:302009-11-25T20:36:46.708+05:30simply awesome!
loved the translation too!
but wel...simply awesome!<br />loved the translation too!<br />but well, if it is abt delhi..sigh..profoundly true but I hate to admit it! :(Himanshu Bhagathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11217398451105288069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-57137939939016957992009-11-25T17:23:26.512+05:302009-11-25T17:23:26.512+05:30beautifully writenbeautifully writenMilana Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16186098503875095727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-88955746579235981252009-11-25T15:56:37.839+05:302009-11-25T15:56:37.839+05:30This is truly beautiful. Lovely verses. The imager...This is truly beautiful. Lovely verses. The imagery you create is astounding!Jyo Had3shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00668894973844498286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-66692038332443300472009-11-25T15:40:17.595+05:302009-11-25T15:40:17.595+05:30AAI-la kya lines hai... Awesome... As usual beauti...AAI-la kya lines hai... Awesome... As usual beautiful composition....<br />Wonderful :)<br /><br />Saurangshu<br />(Cosmo-Bong) :)Saurangshu Kanunjnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17810542602167849728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-75244898310152541402009-11-25T15:30:10.665+05:302009-11-25T15:30:10.665+05:30Very Nice Poem Dear...Simply Awesome.. @rohan2k(tw...Very Nice Poem Dear...Simply Awesome.. @rohan2k(twitter)http://rohanrawat.blogspot.comRohan...https://www.blogger.com/profile/05932570115199164367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-71568053907910448902009-11-25T15:15:30.450+05:302009-11-25T15:15:30.450+05:30superb poetry man awesome :)superb poetry man awesome :)ani_asethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02508868042003107101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-17719441099344687392009-11-25T14:33:40.740+05:302009-11-25T14:33:40.740+05:30nice..lekin urdu aapun ke siir ke upar se gayii .....nice..lekin urdu aapun ke siir ke upar se gayii ..loved the translation by the fabulous blogger :)Toon Indianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07675962505129911588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-21072234949098894582009-11-25T14:27:21.488+05:302009-11-25T14:27:21.488+05:30Wah Adeee... As good as always... missed u here bu...Wah Adeee... As good as always... missed u here buddy :/Shamrez Zackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717153600820537801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18155897.post-25224849075641676492009-11-25T14:13:23.765+05:302009-11-25T14:13:23.765+05:30the translation is pleasing but i loved the origin...the translation is pleasing but i loved the original more...nice one..keep it up :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com