Tuesday, November 07, 2006

what brings you here


chaand

chaand,
aaj raat jab tum jao uski chhat par
to dheere se barasna wahan
samet lena uske har ehsaas ko
aur le aana
subah ki os bana kar

moon
moon,
when you go to her terrace tonight
rain a little lightly there,
embrace her every feel
and bring them to me
in the form of morning's dew

8 comments:

Keshi said...

so pretty!

Keshi.

richunderconstruction said...

Beautiful... The moon holds a special place in my heart as well, an association tinged with innocent memories of my then definition of love :)
Very well said... Few lines, deep meaning.

= rich

adi said...

keshi: thanks buddy.

rich: i dont feel the solitary reaper can break down as yet...i just dont feel it...
i bring love in my heart, can i be of some help :)

suparna said...

a favourite for ur blog again -

"Aao tumko uttha loon kandhon par
Tum uchak kar
sharik honthon se
choom lena yeh chaand ka maatha
Aaj ki raat dekha na tumne
kaise jhuk-jhuk ke, kohniyon ke bal
Chaand itna kareeb aaya hai"

- Gulzar

:)

deepti said...

aata hai lekar yaad teri,
jaata hai uska ehsaas bankar
ye chand ki meherbani kahun
ya rashq karun
ki mohabbat k har pal ka deedar hota hai use...

adi said...

suparna: its one of my favourites too. big time favourite :)

deepti: and then you say, i write better. hhow the hell cud u write so good :)

shadows said...

u hav ur answer in ur monthly read

meet_me said...

beautiful work! Adi,
I'd love to say the same to the moon every night! :-)

dreamt before

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