kisi din subah
jab tum kholo aankhein apni
aur muskurao chupke se
raat ke kisi sapne pe
jab tum kholo aankhein apni
aur muskurao chupke se
raat ke kisi sapne pe
us waqt agar
tumhare chehre par jhuke
main bhar jaoon tumhare naino mein
bus jaoon tumhare hothon mein
tumhare chehre par jhuke
main bhar jaoon tumhare naino mein
bus jaoon tumhare hothon mein
tumhi batao pyaar
kaisi woh subah hogi
kaisi woh subah hogi
a dream for a morning.
translation, i'll attempt in the comments section.m not writing poems here. there is no craft involved. all these are just pieces of conversation we've. like the last one before christmas. or when i imagine i've talked to her, like this one, today.
image courtsey, getty images.
19 comments:
Wah kya khoobsurat subah hogi woh.
Beautiful thought..just wonderful :))))
beautiful words and thoughts
Those conversations are still worth something...I do hope that you continue posting them. I like reading it.
(feeble translations)
dream for a morning
morning
some day in the morning
when you open your eyes
and smile a coy smile
on some dream of last night
that moment, if
bent on your face
i fill up in your eyes
and settle on your lips
tell me love
what a morning that'll be
Adi..just beautiful.It may be just conversations but it is meaningful and many can relate to it.Thanks for sharing.Happy New year.
yes,n tat will be the most beautiful morning,lovely conversation adi,:)
wel kafi dino baad m on ur blog,m back till holidays,then again my papers:(
Subah ki itni khobsurat shuruat :)
Lovely !!
Stay Beautiful...!!
wow! so u converse in poetry ;)
Okk! This reminds me of lines from my poem. I had written a female and male version of same poem, the lines are
"Roz uthta hoon alarm ki awaaz sunnkarr
Ab “Aji sunte ho” ki awaaz sunnkarr uthna chahta hoon"
You can read more Here
"i fill up in your eyes
- and settle on your lips"
beeeeeeeeautiful!!!!!
the bliss of the morning kiss:)
hugs!
Hi again!
Just in case u intend to follow d hindi blog ...
it's shifted to This url
GBU
Arti
hey Adi!
what a conversation ... i mean WOWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
;)
Take care
Cheers!!!
You're right, I haven't really been writing. I've sort of been in a rut (either a lack of things to say or an ineloquent way of saying them). However, I'll resume as soon as I am able to.
Wishing you many more beautiful mornings :)
Mai dhoop k aanchal se dhaanp k vo sapne,tere hothon se kuch lafz chura kar,apni aankhon me ek kavita bunungi,subah se le kar shaam dhale tak apne hothon pe saja tera naam padhungi...
Rt dear wizard.....
Mis u.
have a great year!
Happy new year!!!! ok
You almost make me a believer :). Have a great year
Happy New Year Adi! :)
Keshi.
cuckoo: thanks, hope hum and tum will have a beautiful year ahead :)
aditi: thanks twin
vi: thanks vi. i do hope u come of the blues this new year.
starry: thanks a ton starry. hope u'll recover soon and enjoy life in all its glory.
nihar: sweet factory, may ur wishes come true, soon ;)
sugarlips: u too. wish u many mornings like this.
arti: yes, i read both the poems and bookamrked ur blog at that very moment :)
sophie: hmmmm. bliss is in having love. and in having friends like you. happy new year :)
meet_me: itni badi wow??? hope u r fine now :)
san: wish u same.
anon: i love u. now i want to live u.
yellow: thanks ms curry n' spice :) have a sizzling new year.
totaram ji: ghani khamma annadata, kabhi to padharo mhare des... naya saal mubarak ho, apko bhi.
revealed: well, almost :)
have a great year writing stories and perhaps making your own one ;)
keshi: hey, so u r back? have a blast in the new year, kool keshi.
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