Tuesday, October 30, 2007


din bhar
na khaya kuch, na piya kuch
ghar pohanch kar shaam ko
chup-chap katha padhi choti si
aur chutki bhar chawal hath ke
bandhe chunri ke kone mein

raat ke sadhe-nau baje
chhat ke andhere tukde se
pani chadaya,
chawal vaare
aur chunri ki chalni se dekha
mere chand ne raat ke chand ko

aankhen band karin apni aur yaad kiya
chehra mera,
tabhi kahin jake
khaya kuch aur piya kuch
aise manayi karvachauth
kal chand mere chand ne

11 comments:

Cuckoo said...

Kitna achha likha hai Adi aapne.

Aapko aapke chand ki chaandni hamesha-2 isi tereh milti rahe. :-)

Ashu said...

Oye Adi, too good yar. Very good poem likkha ha. Loved it to core. Tussi cha gaye!!!

Aditi said...

aww so sweet of her.. i hope it went well? janaab aapne kya kiya?

AaaDee said...

bahut khoob...ur words has the magic..!!

Minal said...

ohhh now that was an interesting end.
I mean i never knew this seemingly non-romantic verse about the daily trudges of life would end in karva chauth.
different way of putting it, i must say.

Ritwik Banerjee said...

beautiful poem!

adi said...

cuckoo: dhanyavad dost. aur hum aur tum, dono ko hi diwali ki dher sari shubhkamnayein :)

ashu: thanks u hai ji !!!

aditi: apko kya lagta hai twin ji, agar woh din bhar kuch nahi khayeingi to hum kya karte?

aaadee: thanks and good to see u back.

minal: thanks. and welcome to delhidreams.

ritwik: thanks buddy. and welcome to delhidreams :)

Anonymous said...

"ohhh now that was an interesting end.
I mean i never knew this seemingly non-romantic verse about the daily trudges of life would end in karva chauth."

Strange!! I could guess that from the first line :)

starry nights said...

Adi from reading the comments I think this is an awesome poem and would love it if you can translate.thanks.

vebhuti said...

i second anonymous' comment. it was obvious. but very well written. admittedly.

hope said...

*beautiful*

dreamt before

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