
khali ghonslon ki tarah
khali meri ankhein
raah takti hain din bhar
ke jo panchi bikhre hain teri yaad ke
shaam ho jaye jara
toh laut aayein ghar apne
these eyes of mine
empty, like empty nests
wait all day long
for the scattered birds of your memories
to return home
when the evening falls
14 comments:
hi how are you?
you have a gift of stringing together simple words that creat magic that touches the soul.
thank you, adi
Beautiful.
Acutely, piercingly beautiful.
And yes, great minds think alike... dont they?
:-) very, very nicely put. Classic Adi after ages.
kaylee: hey friend, m all right. how r u doing?
fern: thanks switchsky :)
ash: yes ash, they do ;) thanks a lot. i hope u've settled in well and nice there.
howdy: after ages? i thought u liked 'and there was love' :) anyways, hows junior doing? and how r u coping up ;) thanks N.
u ...got offended...
u refused to publish my comment...
u like compliments...
i....read ur blog...u dont...
even if u dint wanna publish the comment...i would hav been glad if u atleast replied...
hmmm...now i refuse to comment or compliment....
gr8 poem this one...
and i got another gr8 thing to share...ashah is married and in USA..congrats :)
Beautiful!!!!!
what i had said was...from now on i refuse to read the translations...
it kills the feeling i get.
and i want u to write on random things as well....not just the adee syndrome....i already know abt that, ur getting too predictable
Beautiful! :)
Thanks a lot for visiting and commenting on my blog Woods of Words (woodsofwords.blogspot.com)
However, I'm not blogging anymore there and sanyukta28.blogspot.com is my primary blog these days. i would be grateful if you would visit that again too, sometime.
Thanks. :)
Beautiful words Adi...hamesha ki tarha :)
How is Dee going? Give her a highfive from my side and tell her I miss her :D
Stay Beautiful...!!
You are expert in making mountain out of mole ! :P I mean weaveing a classic out of ordinary words is no joke.
Compliment hai !! Le lo.
:-)
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