Friday, March 07, 2008

hasrat / the longing



khali ghonslon ki tarah

khali meri ankhein
raah takti hain din bhar
ke jo panchi bikhre hain teri yaad ke
shaam ho jaye jara
toh laut aayein ghar apne


these eyes of mine
empty, like empty nests
wait all day long
for the scattered birds of your memories
to return home
when the evening falls

14 comments:

KAYLEE said...

hi how are you?

Fern said...

you have a gift of stringing together simple words that creat magic that touches the soul.

thank you, adi

Ash said...

Beautiful.

Acutely, piercingly beautiful.

Ash said...

And yes, great minds think alike... dont they?

How do we know said...

:-) very, very nicely put. Classic Adi after ages.

adi said...

kaylee: hey friend, m all right. how r u doing?

fern: thanks switchsky :)

ash: yes ash, they do ;) thanks a lot. i hope u've settled in well and nice there.

howdy: after ages? i thought u liked 'and there was love' :) anyways, hows junior doing? and how r u coping up ;) thanks N.

shadows said...

u ...got offended...
u refused to publish my comment...
u like compliments...
i....read ur blog...u dont...

shadows said...

even if u dint wanna publish the comment...i would hav been glad if u atleast replied...
hmmm...now i refuse to comment or compliment....

naren_buddy said...

gr8 poem this one...
and i got another gr8 thing to share...ashah is married and in USA..congrats :)

Gillian @ Indigo Blue said...

Beautiful!!!!!

shadows said...

what i had said was...from now on i refuse to read the translations...
it kills the feeling i get.
and i want u to write on random things as well....not just the adee syndrome....i already know abt that, ur getting too predictable

Sanyukta said...

Beautiful! :)

Thanks a lot for visiting and commenting on my blog Woods of Words (woodsofwords.blogspot.com)

However, I'm not blogging anymore there and sanyukta28.blogspot.com is my primary blog these days. i would be grateful if you would visit that again too, sometime.

Thanks. :)

Sugarlips said...

Beautiful words Adi...hamesha ki tarha :)

How is Dee going? Give her a highfive from my side and tell her I miss her :D

Stay Beautiful...!!

Cuckoo said...

You are expert in making mountain out of mole ! :P I mean weaveing a classic out of ordinary words is no joke.

Compliment hai !! Le lo.
:-)

dreamt before

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