kabhi kabhi
raat mein
aansu liye sota hoon
aankh mein
subah uththa hoon
to os milti hai bikhri huyi, charon or
sometimes
at night
i sleep with tears
in my eyes
and i wake up to find, next morn
dew spread across, all around
one more time i failed. one more time i told myself that i'll win. one more time i slept with tears in my eyes. and one more time i woke up with dreams not yet dry.
image copyright: corbis.com
14 comments:
Adi..I am saddened by your tears , wish I could erase them.
Lovely! beautiful as ever!
tum kaise itna achha likh lete ho.. har baar??
this is ... this. n no words can ever explain the beauty of your words...
i love you.
some of my days have been frequently visited by dew too...i feel for that prose.....
starry: thanks. it helps wen somebody is there to share your tears.
nm: thanks N.
howdy: koshish karta hoon, dee ka naam leta hoon, bus aur kuch nahi :)
OM: i love you too. was it predetermined that i'll be calling you OM?
deli: i know. and thats why you write this good. ur blog is an inspiration to so many people :)
i like the pic as well as thought, no matter how cliche it may sound, it true.
So poignant
You write beautifully!
OM: no its not cliched! i love u. is that cliched? :)
raji: hmmmm
SPS: thanks
I loved this one! What a thought you have gathered.....Loved each every word of it!
http://neilina.wordpress.com/
"dreams not yet dry"
this is what really matters...
neilina: thanks
human: yes that is what really matters. thaks my dear friend :)
How very true!!
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