is baar
is baar jab miloonga us se
ginoonga ek ek palak us ki
is baar jab miloonga us se
ginoonga ek ek palak us ki
chu-oonga us ko apni saanson se
aur bununga sapne hazar, sirf uske liye
is baar jab miloonga us se
jioonga usse phir ek din, jee bhar ke, baar-baar
this time
this time when i meet her
i'll count every eye-lash of hers
will touch her with my breath
and spin a thousand dreams, only for her
this time, when i meet her
i'll live her one more day, to the fullest, many times
12 comments:
What lovely words they are !!
Adi, I read all your posts but generally I am at a loss as what to write as my comments... Total dumbstruck
SO beautiful, wonderful everything looks when I come to your blog.. SO much love...so relaxing.
Ummmm I just want to get immerse in it... :))
Thanks very much !!
kuch sapne main ne bhi boone the
hasin sunehre sapne...
sapne tootne ki dard abhitak gunjrahi hain mere dil mein...
par sapne boonne ki addat abhi hain...
aur ek din sapne saach honge..
yeh meri yakeen hain
pardon the spelling mistakes...:P
Ginoonga ek ek palak us ki...
Chu-oonga us ko apni saanson se...
This is searingly beautiful :)
I agree with others what to write as my commnets.
Your sweetheart is very lucky so have a such a loving & romantic person in her life...I wish u both a very happy life together :)
Stay Beautiful...!!
i love the line where you say ke jioon gaa os hi eik din baar baar .. but if one loves someone soo much .. you don't just live that one particular day but live the rest of your lives together.
hmm interesting @ counting the eye lashes .. how come?
awww Sugarlips is here .. u gotta add in your poem dehlidreams about lips (because sugarlips has the prettiest most beautiful lips in the world)
Honto per jo os ke muskorahat behti
Oothney na doon go os ko aik pal
- above is for sugarlips :)
:-) Hmm, the romantic strikes back!
Looks like the Love Bug has bitten Adi big time LOL! Nice :)
Keshi.
Hmmm ...nice one :-)
Do I need to ask how was the weekend ? ;-)
Btw, I saw the poem you posted at your Akshar blog. Left some comments and a link :-)
jab milti hun mai usse,nazar jaati nahi us chehre se,nahi pata aankhe dkhti hun ya fir honth ya palake ya baal, ya muskurahat,nahi pata use dkhti hun ya har us pal ko samet leti hun apne ander jise baar baar apni saans me mehsus karti hun har baar...
oh so very sweet Adi - to
count the eyeslashes:)
tender fellow:)
anon: thanks. m happy that my happiness makes u happy. but who u r dear anonymous?
dwai: i've been trough that. and if u can trust me, pls. understand that it is all leading to something infinitely more beautiful. believe me :)
anon 2: thanks sugarlips!!! u too stay as u are...
nabeel: that particular day is equal to many lifetimes, pardom me for the poetic liberties, but haven't u noticed how time stops by when ur love is around???
sunshine: hmmm, the stricken will srike whom ;)
keshi: lol! big big time gal, big time!!!
sigma: u might have got the ans by now :)
deepti: hmmm. lucky fella who gets u. seriously. damn lucky fella. damned to be lucky...
sophie: i was too afraid and tense this sunday...
all the cells of my entity wants to believe you...
be it..be it.........
but will I be as lucky as you??
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