saal ek aur chala gaya
lakdi ke bakse jaisa ye saal
saja huya waqt ki ibaraton se
sanwara huya pyaar ki aayaton se
bahut kuch saha isne
liya isne, diya isne
ek ek tukda yaadon ka
ek ek katran baaton ki
kitne aansu,
aur kitni khusiyaan,
sahej ke rakh di hain
ismein maine
aur baha raha hoon
umron ki nadi mein
jo bhi tha,
jaisa bhi tha,
yaad bahut ayega ye saal
lakdi ke bakse jaisa ye saal
saja huya waqt ki ibaraton se
sanwara huya pyaar ki aayaton se
bahut kuch saha isne
liya isne, diya isne
ek ek tukda yaadon ka
ek ek katran baaton ki
kitne aansu,
aur kitni khusiyaan,
sahej ke rakh di hain
ismein maine
aur baha raha hoon
umron ki nadi mein
jo bhi tha,
jaisa bhi tha,
yaad bahut ayega ye saal
is saal, maine tujhe paya
14 comments:
Saal Mubarak.
I've lost more in the past week's then i gained in years .. strange koi paata hain to wahi koi khohta hain ..
2006
a translation
one more year has gone by
a year like a wooden box
embellished with writings of the time
decorated with hymns of love
it tolerated so much
took so much, gave so much
every single piece of memories
every single strip of talks
so many tears
and so many smiles
i've kept in this
carefully
and m flowing it in
the river of ages
whatever it was
however it was
this year will be remembered more
this year, i found you
Could not have said it better."one more year has gone by
a year like a wooden box
embellished with writings of the time
decorated with hymns of love
it tolerated so much
took so much, gave so much
Never looked a t a year like that.I think the most important part of 2006 was when u found your true love.
thanks for sharing Adi.
beautiful as always
happy new year..dear twin i hope the coming year is even better to u
Yaadein - sunheri yaadein
inhe sajaa kar rakh lo
mann ke kisi kone mein
aanewale saalon mein
kabhi phir se us kone mein jaanaa
aur kholnaa yaadon ke is bakse ko
aur phir se jii lenaa
yeh sunhare pal ...
yaad bahut ayega ye saal
is saal, maine tujhe paya Lovely!
Yeh saal humein yaad na aaye, bass yahi khwaish hai, iss saal mein dafan mere ishq ki laash hai! :(
You know, Adi,
the world just fills up with
more love since you and your
princess found one another:)
love ya both
(hugs)
sophie
...iss saal maine use paake khoya!!!
One that was almost without love, huh? :)
I never knew one can see & remember a gone year this way.
Very beautiful. More beautiful because you found your love in this year.
Sigma, your lines are also wonderful. :))
im not a big fan of poems, but ures i like. =).. and i like ure translations, because you dont loose the feeling in it..
Aur maine pyar... Luv u a lot my dear wizard...
san: :( wish i cud help
adi: gud translation yaar!!!
starry: thanks starry. with so many ppl around me feeling blue, m not sure whether to feel happy or not :(
aditi: same wish for u twin
sigma: beautiful lines. that is why the metaphor of a wooden box was used. so that someone else can also share these memories with me.
arti: oh arti :(
sophie: wish u more love, ms persisting stars
dwai: what yaar, is everybody around me blue???
revealed: cos u didn't met me before!!!
cuckoo: thanks dost. atleast, hum and tum are in love :)
choco: *sigh* atlast, somebody noticed my translation skills. considering that u r very choosey about what u read, m very happy :)
anon: i found u. and that's bliss.
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