Thursday, May 31, 2007

i am you



bun ke rakhoon kuch khwab
teri subahon ke sirhaane


chun ke layoon hansi ke tukde
in uljhe baalon ko suljhane


ban ke uthoon, ek tinka umeed ka
ghar se tere pehle kadam ke sath


main dekhoon ye duniya teri ankhon se
main jiyoon ye zindagi, bus tere bahane

12 comments:

adi said...

attempted translation,

weaving & placing some dreams
on the pillow of your mornings

picking a few pieces of smiles
to comb your tangled hair

rise as a spec of hope
with your first step out of home

i see this world with your eyes
i live this life, only as you, for you

starry nights said...

WOW! you do see her world with your eyes.You are indeed her.Another beautiful poem Adi.I love it.

Arti Honrao said...

So romantic :)



GBU
Arti

San said...

very pretty

Dust Unsettled said...

You write very well dude... Keep up the good work...

As per your demand, I have posted the movie review of "Cheeni Kum" on my blog

Enjoy the movie... :)

Maddie said...

He said this to me last week -
I live each day now for you.

I love "picking a few pieces of smiles
to comb your angled hair"

:)

Maddie said...

um...that was "tangled" of course:)

hugs!

deepti said...

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....
Hmmm...
Tujhe pata hai?
Kuch nahi...

deepti said...

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....
Hmmm...
Tujhe pata hai?
Kuch nahi...

adi said...

starry: thanks lalitha. hows maya?

arti: gud to c u here :)

san: and i missed u on delhidreams :(

dust: read it already. bus, waiting for the day wen she'll accompany me to the movie :)

maddie: any word, any expression by you, is waited, eagerly and kept in that memory box of petals and polka dots :)

dee: hmmmm. nothing. love. that's it.

Maddie said...

petals and polkadots -
can i use this for a post adi?

please?

state of mind? said...

such deep thoughts written in such a simple manner...it seems as if ur poetry is the way by which u communicate to the world....it seems to effortless!!!

cheers!

dreamt before

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