love is a part of one's very being, it's not GIFTED; love is a very personal sentiment, one doesn't have to pronounce it from the rooftop or make an exhibition of it.
cuckoo: apart from the obvious source, i can perfectly trace this to a couple of blog entries i read and to the fact that i've been neck deep in the corporate presentation of a client that makes threads for business...
aditi: she found some insecurity in those lines
wat's in a name: yup, nothing, although i wud prefer you to be my pino
Adi - she was in you all along - and you are a gift to each other - i loved this poem almost most of all i think - and you are such a handsome oh my gosh - handsome prince for your beautiful princess:)
OH! Adi I love these lines.It is so deep and I can almost feel the love you have for Dee.The last few lines were just awesome. how do you get these thoughts..I think its the love you have for Dee.
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Lovely lovely.
Where do you get these ideas from ??
Now I want a different answer. Don't say Dee, Love, etc etc.
aww.. loved the last few lines.. lest it unravel wtihout u
Waiting for a Sunday update ;)
love is a part of one's very being, it's not GIFTED;
love is a very personal sentiment,
one doesn't have to pronounce it from the rooftop or make an exhibition of it.
This one makes me wonder the thought behind it - that of tying the knot ? ;-)
cuckoo: apart from the obvious source, i can perfectly trace this to a couple of blog entries i read and to the fact that i've been neck deep in the corporate presentation of a client that makes threads for business...
aditi: she found some insecurity in those lines
wat's in a name: yup, nothing, although i wud prefer you to be my pino
dear anon: to each his/her own
sigma: ;)
Adi - she was in you all along -
and you are a gift to each other -
i loved this poem almost most of all
i think -
and you are such a handsome
oh my gosh - handsome prince for
your beautiful princess:)
hugs...
wonderful gust of your love.
OH! Adi I love these lines.It is so deep and I can almost feel the love you have for Dee.The last few lines were just awesome. how do you get these thoughts..I think its the love you have for Dee.
Hmmm...
Do i say anything else?
Naah.....
Love,love n love...
Your "aurat" poem is very touching. U've found very good words to express ur feelings there...
im here after real long, n realise i missed this place :)
lovely lovely!
n th way u weave threads n laces into a poem of love ... oh!
keep writing, hope all good wit u :)
maddie: wen my words make u feel that gust of love even for a moment, they fulfill their meaning :)
starry: yes, its all hers now :)
dee: no, u just sit there n enjoy...
red: thanks. i liked those words too.
rich: its an edifice meant to be completed someday soon...
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