Lovely lovely.Where do you get these ideas from ??Now I want a different answer. Don't say Dee, Love, etc etc.
aww.. loved the last few lines.. lest it unravel wtihout u
Waiting for a Sunday update ;)
love is a part of one's very being, it's not GIFTED;love is a very personal sentiment,one doesn't have to pronounce it from the rooftop or make an exhibition of it.
This one makes me wonder the thought behind it - that of tying the knot ? ;-)
cuckoo: apart from the obvious source, i can perfectly trace this to a couple of blog entries i read and to the fact that i've been neck deep in the corporate presentation of a client that makes threads for business...aditi: she found some insecurity in those lineswat's in a name: yup, nothing, although i wud prefer you to be my pinodear anon: to each his/her ownsigma: ;)
Adi - she was in you all along -and you are a gift to each other -i loved this poem almost most of all i think -and you are such a handsome oh my gosh - handsome prince foryour beautiful princess:)hugs...wonderful gust of your love.
OH! Adi I love these lines.It is so deep and I can almost feel the love you have for Dee.The last few lines were just awesome. how do you get these thoughts..I think its the love you have for Dee.
Hmmm...Do i say anything else?Naah.....Love,love n love...
Your "aurat" poem is very touching. U've found very good words to express ur feelings there...
im here after real long, n realise i missed this place :)lovely lovely!n th way u weave threads n laces into a poem of love ... oh!keep writing, hope all good wit u :)
maddie: wen my words make u feel that gust of love even for a moment, they fulfill their meaning :)starry: yes, its all hers now :)dee: no, u just sit there n enjoy...red: thanks. i liked those words too.rich: its an edifice meant to be completed someday soon...
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