Monday, July 16, 2007

sometimes i feel


in this book of life

we,

are but annotations

scribbled on the margins

by a student

that is time

28 comments:

Alok said...

man .... u cease to amaze me ....

btw have u noticed that all metaphors can be uniquely attached to a single word that's called life. We do that everytime and still are left with loads afterwards to use them in one more different manner ... it's an unending endeavor

gr8 stuff as usual

adi said...

alok: have i ceased to amaze u ;)
thanks man, it was gr8 talking to u

Alok said...

hey adi .... yes u cease to amaze me ..... coz i have taken brilliance assumed from u ....

btw never mind "never" (thats implied)

Alok said...

hey btw i was going thru ur prv post and really enjoyed the countdown (though the way i read it was count up)

cya

Ash said...

"by a student - that is time"

Beautiful!

Aditi said...

haha beautiful..
waqt ke nishaan ya phir kismat ke?

Dream Catcher said...

pretty thoughtful...
right now m jst outta words..so cldn't reflect much..

adi said...

alok: never will i mind, thanks :) which post?

ash: m glad u liked it

twin: he he, tum bhi na, yahan to waqt hi likh raha hai kismat hamari :)

dreamcatcher: go, sort out ur realities, both of us will wait...

Maddie said...

Deepti is the most beautiful flower in the
field of flowers:)

AaaDee !! said...

beutifully written..

Waqt, so powerful i thought, is a mere student :)

deepti said...

i love you.

suparna said...

often i dont know whether i relish reading your thoughts more or the way you put it, where English poetry too gets a shayarana andaaz..

(Note: me doesnt enjoy English poetry as much as Shayari, thats why the comparison. It's the sounds of Hindi/Urdu words that i love, for no apparent reason)

How do we know said...

so true!

Alok said...

although bahut baar padha..i just couldn't understand. why do u refer time as a student ?

Anonymous said...

please stop contacting me. its too much.

Mindinside said...

Time's crazy speed is scaring me sometimes

dharmabum said...

hmmm? i thot everybody says time is imaginary. now u say time is student. so the stupid bum in me concludes, student is imaginary. which rings a bell - i went to school, never was a student :)

:P

Dust Unsettled said...

a student - who sometimes fails the test, sometimes scores high, sometimes don't do much - just day-dream of better "times"

Keshi said...

wow Adi!

Keshi.

adi said...

maddie: not in this field alone :)

aaadee: there is someone infinitely more powerful than that student here. think abt that too :)

deepti: hmmmm, very interesting comment ;)

suparna: recently i was discussing you with dee, and how i absolutely cherish your comments. every sentence by you written here is treasured. and am yet to see 'kinara' as advised.

how do we know: indeed! but i would like u to read alok's first comment. please do think in those terms also. pls do tell me what u think.

alok: hmmmmm. ab to mujhe bhi sochna padega ;) its a longish story actually,might post it someday. nahi to chat to karenge hi kabhi dobara...

anon: theek hai. but atleast tell me whom m supposed to stop talking to.

mindslide: r u reading my mind :)

dharma: :p

dust: perfectly put :)

keshi: thanks, the koolest one. hope u r fine.

Alok said...

hey adi ... saw another alok on ur comments ... and ur reply ....
*nahi to chat to karenge hi kabhi dobara...

were u talking abt me???

btw how r u

adi said...

wordpress alok & blogger alok: this delhidream alok requests you both to sort out the confusion. can't say who is who :)

rebel said...

Well, just stumbled on your blog.. Nice li'l verse, I should say...

suparna said...

oh ma .. discussing me! (faint) .. kya yaar, i just write innocuous little comments, woh bhi all that i declare as copied, aap to bass... :))
aur jab Dee ki baat chali hai hi, to unhen bhi mera salaam kahiyega.
btw, she's an MA English student is she?

suparna said...

incidentally - a line that has been haunting me off late -
Waqt ke sitam kam haseen nahin..

Sugarlips said...

A-m-a-z-i-n-g :)

Stay Beautiful...!!

adi said...

rebel: thanks, hope u'll keep stumbling here ;)

suparna: ji, jaroor kahenge. aur aap ab apni in lines ko poora bhi kar dijiyega. pls :)

sugar: thanks.

adi said...

suparna: yes, she is. a student of MA Eng Lit and a teacher also.

dreamt before

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