Wednesday, July 11, 2007

sawaal



aankhein band karo apni, abhi
aur mehsoos karo
ke ghul rahe hain ve sahare
jin ke bharose baithe ho tum
ya mit raha hai woh farsh
jahan khade ho tum is waqt
hawa ho rahe hain, manjilon oonche
ve saare bhram
jo alag karte hain
tumhein mujhse

aa jao ab tum
thos satah par meri
chuo
jaano
bhar lo aagosh mein
mere har ehsaas ko
suno
ke dhadak rahi hain ragein meri
ke har hissa
suna raha hai kahaniyan hazar
choti ho ya badi
achi ya buri
sunti, sehti
dekhti, kehti
rachti rahi hoon main
ye kahaniyan sadiyon se
jab se janm liya hai
jindagi ke maksad ne

jaano
ke zinda hoon main
aur pooch rahi hoon tumse
kaun si kahani kal
chodoge tum mere liye

21 comments:

Sigma said...

Ah! And what a question it is!!

Shruti said...

kuch unsune sawal, ya phir kuch unsuljhe....

beautifully written...

Take care

adi said...

sigma: ji.

shruti: thanks. i will.

Cuckoo said...

I am amazed... how can you write so beautifully every time ?

Dream Catcher said...

ha ha..its sweet..

kahani bas reh jaayega muaakil mere hatho mein
lamhon mein guzra ek lamha woh ansuni baaton mein...
ankhein band bhi kare tab..dikhti hai parchaiyaa
sunte hai ham khade dil-e-pareshaniyan

ku-ba-ku kahi kisi kone mein
liye apne haatho mein
ghul gaye sehara mein woh ajanbi sahare..
ek boond hey bas..saahil kinaare..
akhon mein rundhti kare ishaare...

Sugarlips said...

This is so beautifully weaved Adi :)


Stay Beautiful..!!

adi said...

cuckdookoo: yaar, itna mat chadaya karo tum...

dreamcatcher: sweet? :)
what is 'ku-ba-ku'?
"lamhon mein guzra ek lamha woh ansuni baaton mein..."
hmmmm, good bro, seems me

sugar: thanks. how r guys?

Aditi said...

beautiful... so many undercurrents i detect...

nihar said...

kya baat hai adi,nice question indeed,haiiiiiiiiiii kash aisa sawal humse koi pooche;)
wel amazingly wriiten,adi m jealous of u,u write so beautifully:)
take care dear

adi said...

aditi: hmmmm =)

sweet factory: now that u n aditi have pointed out, i too detect some more things in this ;)
and oye, don't be jealous of me, all i've is ur di with me, otherwise m just a poor, lonely, devoid of words man :(

Dream Catcher said...

ku-ba-ku
means gali gali..

yeah its sweet..n sugary..ek pal sa hai..jisme bikharne ka dil karta hai..ye sawaal :)

deepti said...

band aankho me chupi, sadiyon puarani, anjaan kuch,kuch jani pehchani, waqt se pehle,waqt k baad,teri meri likhi har kahani, fir usi satah ki zubaani, ban kar aayegi wahi nayi kahani.
na bharam koi,na faasle hamare beech, na oonchiyon k tale simte hue raaz ki zubaani,na saharon ki zarurat, na mit-te bharoson ki chah,na manzil tak jaati koi dagar purani,
jo dekha, suna, jana, har pal kiya mehsus, wo chand lamhe khusi k sahej lena tum, aur dena use jo aaye tumhare paas aur mange ye kahani. yahi toh hai bus, choti si, nazuk si, andekhi, fir bhi jani pehchani.

adi said...

dee: "chaand lamhe", bus aur kuch nahi...

Anonymous said...

hey! i got in touch wit u if u remember. n whts blogrolled? ur blog is luking gud

totaram

Alok said...

good stuff man ....

deepti said...

adi: i love you.

adi said...

totaram ki aatma ji: yup, one time touch it was :(

blogrolled is that u r on my bloglinks, btw, thanks for the visit

alok: thanks mate

dee:i love u too swthrt

Mindinside said...

hey
"sawaal" means question?:)

adi said...

mindslide: yes in urdu it is 'sawaal' and in hindi it is 'prashan'

MAHIMA said...

A:
your writing is interesting... and do you take the images on your blog yourself?

adi said...

mahima: thanks. the pics r courtsey stock image sites. and well, thanks again for visiting delhidreams. hope u'll continue to inspire me more :)

dreamt before

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