aankhein band karo apni, abhi
aur mehsoos karo
ke ghul rahe hain ve sahare
jin ke bharose baithe ho tum
ya mit raha hai woh farsh
jahan khade ho tum is waqt
hawa ho rahe hain, manjilon oonche
ve saare bhram
jo alag karte hain
tumhein mujhse
aa jao ab tum
thos satah par meri
chuo
jaano
bhar lo aagosh mein
mere har ehsaas ko
suno
ke dhadak rahi hain ragein meri
ke har hissa
suna raha hai kahaniyan hazar
choti ho ya badi
achi ya buri
sunti, sehti
dekhti, kehti
rachti rahi hoon main
ye kahaniyan sadiyon se
jab se janm liya hai
jindagi ke maksad ne
jaano
ke zinda hoon main
aur pooch rahi hoon tumse
kaun si kahani kal
chodoge tum mere liye
21 comments:
Ah! And what a question it is!!
kuch unsune sawal, ya phir kuch unsuljhe....
beautifully written...
Take care
sigma: ji.
shruti: thanks. i will.
I am amazed... how can you write so beautifully every time ?
ha ha..its sweet..
kahani bas reh jaayega muaakil mere hatho mein
lamhon mein guzra ek lamha woh ansuni baaton mein...
ankhein band bhi kare tab..dikhti hai parchaiyaa
sunte hai ham khade dil-e-pareshaniyan
ku-ba-ku kahi kisi kone mein
liye apne haatho mein
ghul gaye sehara mein woh ajanbi sahare..
ek boond hey bas..saahil kinaare..
akhon mein rundhti kare ishaare...
This is so beautifully weaved Adi :)
Stay Beautiful..!!
cuckdookoo: yaar, itna mat chadaya karo tum...
dreamcatcher: sweet? :)
what is 'ku-ba-ku'?
"lamhon mein guzra ek lamha woh ansuni baaton mein..."
hmmmm, good bro, seems me
sugar: thanks. how r guys?
beautiful... so many undercurrents i detect...
kya baat hai adi,nice question indeed,haiiiiiiiiiii kash aisa sawal humse koi pooche;)
wel amazingly wriiten,adi m jealous of u,u write so beautifully:)
take care dear
aditi: hmmmm =)
sweet factory: now that u n aditi have pointed out, i too detect some more things in this ;)
and oye, don't be jealous of me, all i've is ur di with me, otherwise m just a poor, lonely, devoid of words man :(
ku-ba-ku
means gali gali..
yeah its sweet..n sugary..ek pal sa hai..jisme bikharne ka dil karta hai..ye sawaal :)
band aankho me chupi, sadiyon puarani, anjaan kuch,kuch jani pehchani, waqt se pehle,waqt k baad,teri meri likhi har kahani, fir usi satah ki zubaani, ban kar aayegi wahi nayi kahani.
na bharam koi,na faasle hamare beech, na oonchiyon k tale simte hue raaz ki zubaani,na saharon ki zarurat, na mit-te bharoson ki chah,na manzil tak jaati koi dagar purani,
jo dekha, suna, jana, har pal kiya mehsus, wo chand lamhe khusi k sahej lena tum, aur dena use jo aaye tumhare paas aur mange ye kahani. yahi toh hai bus, choti si, nazuk si, andekhi, fir bhi jani pehchani.
dee: "chaand lamhe", bus aur kuch nahi...
hey! i got in touch wit u if u remember. n whts blogrolled? ur blog is luking gud
totaram
good stuff man ....
adi: i love you.
totaram ki aatma ji: yup, one time touch it was :(
blogrolled is that u r on my bloglinks, btw, thanks for the visit
alok: thanks mate
dee:i love u too swthrt
hey
"sawaal" means question?:)
mindslide: yes in urdu it is 'sawaal' and in hindi it is 'prashan'
A:
your writing is interesting... and do you take the images on your blog yourself?
mahima: thanks. the pics r courtsey stock image sites. and well, thanks again for visiting delhidreams. hope u'll continue to inspire me more :)
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