Wednesday, July 04, 2007

they call me love

I am the savior
The messiah
They long for millennia
And crucify
The moment
Life compels a choice
The unpleasant edifice
I am the sacrifice
Unrequited I leave
Uninvited I arrive

35 comments:

Cuckoo said...

Very beautiful Adi !!

No words to write now.

Dream Catcher said...

yeah true..very true..

unrequited they leave...

Appu said...

They long for millennia
And crucify
The moment
Life compels a choice

the human race has forgotten how to choose!!!

meet_me said...

:)

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet". Plato

u were already a good one, so for u, this should be modified to

""At the touch of love, everyone becomes an amazing poet". ~ Payal

cheers!!!

oceanicmirages said...

just two words........
So me...

adi said...

cuckdookoo: thanks. but the moment was not.

dream catcher: yeah and u just tear away those sheets of love... nothing remains forever kya?

appu: that is why 'compelled'... anyways, thanks for the visit, after a long time.

payal: how can i even think of being one. amazing is the last urdu one on dee's blog. read it ?

dee: so we.

Mindinside said...

hey thank you for adding me to your follow dreamers.

It is a joy to witness and watch loved ones at eachother's side.

a joy watching you two here together... Viva Love

eb said...

this is very beautiful
and I also love
- LOVE -
The God of Small Things

xox - eb.

Dream Catcher said...

nothing remains forever..pretty loaded isn't it..

but my sweet bro i wish everything lasts for u forever..;) its a serious pray that i cry for u..:)

i tore away those sheets of love as a tribute of the dead...
( i guess i read right between the lines if not let me knw)

nihar said...

m back adi:)
lifeeeeeeeeee m in no mood of doing philosophy for mr. philosopher:),
check my blog hny

Madelyn said...

ohhhhhhh -

i love what meet me said...

at the touch of love everyone
becomes a poet - it is SO true!


hugs:)

adi said...

mindslide: thanks for the visit. and your words compelled me to add u, you enrich delhidreams.

eb: hey, can't access ur page. thanks for the visit. can i know more about u?

dreamcatcher: its kind of interesting to twist reality, hai na? i say if u look a little straighter, u'll find the foreverness in every nothing that lasts forever. and yeah, u read correctly :)

sf: good for u smoochest ;)

maddie: true for u, me? just learning the ropes ma'm :)

Dream Catcher said...

hmm sound very lucid...n smooth but infact its other side...can tell u better..ha ha..trust me on this ;)

n twisting the reality ??? uhmm didn't get..

deepti said...

hmmmmmmmm...
so we...

adi said...

dream: the augmented realities are not real, they are twisted, modified from their original form...so u can look at the real reality sometimes.

as for the other side, ur side bro, don't u think there might be other sides to the mirage-dreams also.

dee: hmmmmm, now i'll say, so me ;)

Dream Catcher said...

ha ha ..so u caught the meaning of alter ego i created..

n as per other side..adi show me that.if there is i wanna c...

Dream Catcher said...

but the twisted can be taken in negative connotation as what i dont intend..more of its a virtual reality..it is real but not yet seen

anu1985 said...

Adiji sabko apna aadi hi bana kar chodoge..but you are good!!!!!!!!!

starry nights said...

love your new look. how are you and Dee. you have been on a reading spree.

shadows said...

would i need to know that from ur profile if i wanted to read ur blog anyway,....
adi ...in love....

adi said...

dreamcatcher: no, i don't want that other side to seen. ok, twisted was wrong, virtual would do.

anu: ab aapne bola hai to man-na hi padega...

starry: how have both of u been? yeah, but the reading spree has halted a bit these days...

shadows: ummmmmm, nahi. but kuch aur dimaag mein aaya hi nahi tha...

Ash said...

OMG, i just love it. Particularly the last two lines!

adi said...

ash: thanks ash, i love it when people come over and read these lines... but strangely speaking, i didn't want anybody to appreciate these... this was not me ash :(

Dream Catcher said...

hmm sry didn't mean to show the other side..i guess i jst got carried away..:)

Ash said...

As requested, I have posted a color image of the cloud pattern. Check it out!

Keshi said...

wow excellent Adi!

Keshi.

adi said...

dreamcatcher: no probs bro, take care

ash: thanks dost

keshi: hmmmmm, thank you, 'the koolest one'.

Sigma said...

This is lovely, and like Cuckoo, I have no words.

And good to see you back in flow :-)

adi said...

sigma: nice to have u here, actually :)

Alok said...

couldnt help reading it twice ..

*hawa ho rahe hain, manjilon oonche
ve saare bhram

... gr8 stuff

Alok said...

hey sorry man .... the comment was for ur more recent post .....

*unrequited I leave
Uninvited I arrive ...

words fail me ...

adi said...

alok: he he, thanks man, hows life?

How do we know said...

the last 2 lines define love so completely!

adi said...

howdoweknow: hmmmmm, is that so. is that enough?

Nikki said...

This indeed is a nice poem!

dreamt before

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