I am the savior
The messiah
They long for millennia
And crucify
The moment
Life compels a choice
The unpleasant edifice
I am the sacrifice
Unrequited I leave
Uninvited I arrive
The messiah
They long for millennia
And crucify
The moment
Life compels a choice
The unpleasant edifice
I am the sacrifice
Unrequited I leave
Uninvited I arrive
35 comments:
Very beautiful Adi !!
No words to write now.
yeah true..very true..
unrequited they leave...
They long for millennia
And crucify
The moment
Life compels a choice
the human race has forgotten how to choose!!!
:)
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet". Plato
u were already a good one, so for u, this should be modified to
""At the touch of love, everyone becomes an amazing poet". ~ Payal
cheers!!!
just two words........
So me...
cuckdookoo: thanks. but the moment was not.
dream catcher: yeah and u just tear away those sheets of love... nothing remains forever kya?
appu: that is why 'compelled'... anyways, thanks for the visit, after a long time.
payal: how can i even think of being one. amazing is the last urdu one on dee's blog. read it ?
dee: so we.
hey thank you for adding me to your follow dreamers.
It is a joy to witness and watch loved ones at eachother's side.
a joy watching you two here together... Viva Love
this is very beautiful
and I also love
- LOVE -
The God of Small Things
xox - eb.
nothing remains forever..pretty loaded isn't it..
but my sweet bro i wish everything lasts for u forever..;) its a serious pray that i cry for u..:)
i tore away those sheets of love as a tribute of the dead...
( i guess i read right between the lines if not let me knw)
m back adi:)
lifeeeeeeeeee m in no mood of doing philosophy for mr. philosopher:),
check my blog hny
ohhhhhhh -
i love what meet me said...
at the touch of love everyone
becomes a poet - it is SO true!
hugs:)
mindslide: thanks for the visit. and your words compelled me to add u, you enrich delhidreams.
eb: hey, can't access ur page. thanks for the visit. can i know more about u?
dreamcatcher: its kind of interesting to twist reality, hai na? i say if u look a little straighter, u'll find the foreverness in every nothing that lasts forever. and yeah, u read correctly :)
sf: good for u smoochest ;)
maddie: true for u, me? just learning the ropes ma'm :)
hmm sound very lucid...n smooth but infact its other side...can tell u better..ha ha..trust me on this ;)
n twisting the reality ??? uhmm didn't get..
hmmmmmmmm...
so we...
dream: the augmented realities are not real, they are twisted, modified from their original form...so u can look at the real reality sometimes.
as for the other side, ur side bro, don't u think there might be other sides to the mirage-dreams also.
dee: hmmmmm, now i'll say, so me ;)
ha ha ..so u caught the meaning of alter ego i created..
n as per other side..adi show me that.if there is i wanna c...
but the twisted can be taken in negative connotation as what i dont intend..more of its a virtual reality..it is real but not yet seen
Adiji sabko apna aadi hi bana kar chodoge..but you are good!!!!!!!!!
love your new look. how are you and Dee. you have been on a reading spree.
would i need to know that from ur profile if i wanted to read ur blog anyway,....
adi ...in love....
dreamcatcher: no, i don't want that other side to seen. ok, twisted was wrong, virtual would do.
anu: ab aapne bola hai to man-na hi padega...
starry: how have both of u been? yeah, but the reading spree has halted a bit these days...
shadows: ummmmmm, nahi. but kuch aur dimaag mein aaya hi nahi tha...
OMG, i just love it. Particularly the last two lines!
ash: thanks ash, i love it when people come over and read these lines... but strangely speaking, i didn't want anybody to appreciate these... this was not me ash :(
hmm sry didn't mean to show the other side..i guess i jst got carried away..:)
As requested, I have posted a color image of the cloud pattern. Check it out!
wow excellent Adi!
Keshi.
dreamcatcher: no probs bro, take care
ash: thanks dost
keshi: hmmmmm, thank you, 'the koolest one'.
This is lovely, and like Cuckoo, I have no words.
And good to see you back in flow :-)
sigma: nice to have u here, actually :)
couldnt help reading it twice ..
*hawa ho rahe hain, manjilon oonche
ve saare bhram
... gr8 stuff
hey sorry man .... the comment was for ur more recent post .....
*unrequited I leave
Uninvited I arrive ...
words fail me ...
alok: he he, thanks man, hows life?
the last 2 lines define love so completely!
howdoweknow: hmmmmm, is that so. is that enough?
This indeed is a nice poem!
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