में और तुम
गुजर रहे हैं
केम्प्स की एक सड़क से
लाल ईंट की दीवारें
घने हरे पेड़
और समय एक छोटे बच्चे सा
कूदता-फान्द्ता हमारे चारों और
लाता है चुन-चुन के चीजें
बड़ी सी
...
रस्ते का एक मटमैला पत्थर
सूखे हुए पत्तों का जोडा
उस पेड़ के लट्टू से घूमने वाले हलके भूरे बीज
जिसका नाम भी हमें पता नही
और धुप का एक टुकडा
थाम लिया है जिसने हाथ मेरा
धीरे से
...
कल रात
सपना देखा मैंने
एक सच्चा सा
कल की रात
बड़ी रोशन थी
warning:
translation spoiler in the comments section :)
translation spoiler in the comments section :)
9 comments:
me and you
are strolling through
a road in the campus
red brick walls
dense green trees
and time like a young child
playing around us
brings treasures
big
...
a muddy stone from the road
coupled dried leaves
spinning top seeds of that tree
we don't even know the name of
and a piece of sunshine
which has held my hand
warmly
...
last night
i saw a dream
almost real
last night
was truly resplendent
umm....
OH LOVE IT :P
I love the way u write and u know that ..
"रस्ते का एक मटमैला पत्थर
सूखे हुए पत्तों का जोडा
उस पेड़ के लट्टू से घूमने वाले हलके भूरे बीज
जिसका नाम भी हमें पता नही" - whops Adi this was something ... extremely good ... and loved the way u ended ..
"कल की रात
बड़ी रोशन थी
Hindi /urdu by its structure is a very powerful language and is perhaps far more effective in expressing emotions ........ and english perhaps finds it very difficult to match up with the same emotions that Hindi / urdu throws up
very very well written
Alok
PS: Merry Christmas and Happy holidays
Alok
...and ofcourse a very merry xmas and an extremely wonderful new year to u as well! do hv a blast!
:)
aur us roshan raat me maine dekha khilti subah ko,
dekha ki nikhar rahe hain rang saare,
aur simat kar aana chahte hain daaman me mere,
sang tere,
fir udti titliyon ki tarah chhu kar haule se,
gungunate hai vahi...
na jane kitni sadiyon purani kahani...
kuch apni, kuch hamari...
Happy new Year!!
Loved the Hindi version more. I am so touched. Beautifully written Adee. The feelings that you share, the words that you play with, the thoughts you romance... Extraordinarily Beautiful!
Amazing Adee. Truly touched.
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