Thursday, March 11, 2010

a father waits


शाम उगते ही
वोह अपने बच्चों के
घर लौटने का इंतज़ार करता है 

बच्चें घर हो 
तो रात डराती नहीं

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as the evening dawns
he waits
for the children to come

night doesn't stalk those
whose children are at home

16 comments:

Divesh said...

Absolutely brilliant.. aisa laga jaise Gulzar ka likha kuchh padh raha hoon :-)

Charu said...

Hi Adee,

Yeah it is really really excellent and brilliant. Looks very similar to that of a Lukka chuppi song from Rang De Basanti.. that is between mom and son. :)

-Charu Arvind.

*Aham* said...

lovely! heartfelt.. proves that one neednt be verbose to be beautiful.. he just needs to be beautiful... to be beautiful.. :)

Vivek said...

this is nostalgia at its best....

kudos bro....every word is something which is still unexpressed in this rapid fire world of internet....

ani_aset said...

waah lovely :)

partywithneha said...

Lovely! Loads of posts are written on mothers. This one is different and beautiful :)

Apoyando said...

I loved the English version :)

bindaasviti said...

sighh...so simply said, yet so beautiful!
brilliant adee :) keep up the good work.

Saurangshu Kanunjna said...

As always brilliant,
Bhai kiya likh te hai app.. har alfaz main ehsaas chupa hota hai... :)

geetha said...

Lovely Adee ! I like the way u pen ur emotions ! For'HER'is always awesome ! Keep writing ! U are one of the best !

Sanjay said...

Good one!

Sanjay

Vivek said...

each time u write a poem u leave me speechless :)

pink dogwood said...

subhaan allah :)

How do we know said...

maine aise to kabhi socha nahi tha.. this is brilliant!

shadows said...

like i said... u need a few critics... but this one is nice.

but u need some critics...

Nalini Hebbar said...

Wonderful poetry...the anxiety of a father well depicted

dreamt before

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