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रात के तालाब में
सितारे फेंक रहा है
बहुत बरस हुए अब
रात भरने को आई
मगर इंतज़ार
ख़त्म नहीं हुआ उसका
तुम किसी दिन
सुबह जल्दी उठकर
चूम लेना माथा उसका
शायद,
उसकी थकी आँखों को
सुकून आ जाये
sitting there, on the edge
of the pond that is the night
he picks and throws stars, one by one
its been ages
the night is now brimful with stars
but the end of his wait
is still afar
if some day
you got up early
and kissed his forehead sweet
then,
maybe,
his tired eyes
will find some relief
21 comments:
Short & Sweet... I don't know Hindi but the English version is perfect :-)
Loved this poem Adee.
hmmmm.... :)
I like the Hindi version of the poem. Sweet :)
@adi: hum dono ke beech ek common link hai...waise to kai saare hain...
frankly speking, tumhari kavitaon mein ek gehrai aaayi hai... after following you for some time, i cudn'e resist myself commenting here...
well done dude...
keep it up
उसकी थकी आँखों को
सुकून आ जाये...
^ so meaningful... i like it Adee... keep it up..
thanks all for the comments and feedback :)
Prakash: thanks junior bhai ;) m glad u liked that!
Starry: thanks. hope u r doing well these days.
Shadows: chalo aap muskurayin to sahi! ;)
Pallavi: thanks :)
WM: hmmm, i think i correctly guessed the common link here :) she told me that u've been chori-chupe reading both our blogs :D and much more than 'simple thanks' for the comment. coming from u, its special for me :)
this feels like velvet, Adee... when i was reading through it, i could feel that touch!
the image of night sky being a pond... is so fascinating!
and the stream of emotions... so beautiful!
really enjoyed reading this... thanks!
WOW! Awesome poem with an awesome image attached to it. I loved every bit of it, mate. Kudos to you. I could sense the feeling in each word you had put in there.
Phodu saale.. hamesha phod dete ho.. maza aa gaya.. lovely.. damn good..
traces of Gulzaar
Very nice, brother!
Atee uttam, bhraata shree! =D
Awwwwwie....
So sweet :)
Bugs
Nadhi
Very nice. I like the new look of your blog,too.
Lovely.. so Gulzarish :) I liked the photo up there too :) Keep writing
wonderful Adee!!!!
xo
adi: welcome dude, and i MUST SAY THAT YOU HAVE COME A LONG WAY when it comes to poetry
aah lovely i like the feeling...soft and sweet
loved this !! and also your blog header image !! too good :)
good one, muje aise laga kahi main tho nahi tare phekra us akash main :P
keep writing :D
khushi: shukriya sonal ji :)
human: honored to have u here, dear Crow :) m so glad u read exactly what i meant to. thanks a ton :)
hero: nice name! :) and yeah, thanks a lot for taking the time and the comment. hope you'll visit again :)
HG: hahaha! now i knew the meaning behind hg6 :D thanks a ton buddy!
serendipity: hmmmm :)
Siddharth: dhanyavad bhrata patel! ;)
nadhiya: *cugs* :D
raji: thanks. m gald u liked it. and yes, the blog look changes with every poem :)
neelabh: thanks bhai. accha lagta hai jab real creative souls kuch pasand karte hain :)
Gillian: thanks Blue *hugs* :D
WM: :) am planning to get published! any suggestions? :)
ani: hmmmm, the pain of love is deep and sweet my dear :)
nimue: thanks, glad u liked it. and header image credit goes to an anonymous creator :)
anix: ho sakta hai tum hi ho, ho sakta hai main hoon, par intejaar to ek hi rehta hai... apne mehboob ka, hai na? :) thanks bhai.
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