Thursday, November 24, 2005

Sardiyaan aa gayi hain...

12 comments:

Aditi said...

wah lagta hain is saal sardiya ek month jaldi aa gayi hain
neways well written as always

How do we know said...

:-) agar aur kuchh din nayi post nahi likhoge to main saari puraani posts pee jaoongi.. i m THAT starved for gud poetry.. and thats one of the things i cannot live without..

Ire said...

Sigh how romantic! What Miss Dee have to say?

Palash said...

Wow..awesome choice of words..Beauty is in Simplicity.

Unknown said...

Nice one Adee. I miss winters here in Hyderabad. But I was in Delhi this Sunday and could totally feel what you said above!

Harshit Gupta said...

Bloody Killer. u r just awesome. If I have said that earlier, sorry, but that's the last word of my vocabulary.

RAJI MUTHUKRISHNAN said...

Really good poetry.

Richa said...

B'ful che :)

Sardiyan aa gayi hain, ab shaam ki sair, tera haath pakadne ka ek bahana hai :)

serendipity said...

loved the 2nd and 3rd stanza ...though diametrically opposite sentiments are conveyed!
wishing you the garam shawl moments

thetwistedframes said...

too good Adee :)!

Toon Indian said...

Awesome as always.

delhidreams said...

thanks thanks many thanks to all of u :) this is one of my earliest and most favorite poems, and m glad u liked it :)

dreamt before

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