Thursday, November 24, 2005

Sardiyaan aa gayi hain...

12 comments:

Aditi said...

wah lagta hain is saal sardiya ek month jaldi aa gayi hain
neways well written as always

How do we know said...

:-) agar aur kuchh din nayi post nahi likhoge to main saari puraani posts pee jaoongi.. i m THAT starved for gud poetry.. and thats one of the things i cannot live without..

Nikita Banerjee said...

Sigh how romantic! What Miss Dee have to say?

Palash said...

Wow..awesome choice of words..Beauty is in Simplicity.

Prem Piyush Goyal said...

Nice one Adee. I miss winters here in Hyderabad. But I was in Delhi this Sunday and could totally feel what you said above!

Harshit Gupta said...

Bloody Killer. u r just awesome. If I have said that earlier, sorry, but that's the last word of my vocabulary.

RAJI MUTHUKRISHNAN said...

Really good poetry.

яノςんム said...

B'ful che :)

Sardiyan aa gayi hain, ab shaam ki sair, tera haath pakadne ka ek bahana hai :)

serendipity said...

loved the 2nd and 3rd stanza ...though diametrically opposite sentiments are conveyed!
wishing you the garam shawl moments

Aanchal said...

too good Adee :)!

Toon India said...

Awesome as always.

Adee said...

thanks thanks many thanks to all of u :) this is one of my earliest and most favorite poems, and m glad u liked it :)

dreamt before

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