wah lagta hain is saal sardiya ek month jaldi aa gayi hainneways well written as always
:-) agar aur kuchh din nayi post nahi likhoge to main saari puraani posts pee jaoongi.. i m THAT starved for gud poetry.. and thats one of the things i cannot live without..
Sigh how romantic! What Miss Dee have to say?
Wow..awesome choice of words..Beauty is in Simplicity.
Nice one Adee. I miss winters here in Hyderabad. But I was in Delhi this Sunday and could totally feel what you said above!
Bloody Killer. u r just awesome. If I have said that earlier, sorry, but that's the last word of my vocabulary.
Really good poetry.
B'ful che :)Sardiyan aa gayi hain, ab shaam ki sair, tera haath pakadne ka ek bahana hai :)
loved the 2nd and 3rd stanza ...though diametrically opposite sentiments are conveyed!wishing you the garam shawl moments
too good Adee :)!
Awesome as always.
thanks thanks many thanks to all of u :) this is one of my earliest and most favorite poems, and m glad u liked it :)
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