आकाश और कुछ नहीं
समुद्र है गहरा सा
और पंछी तैरते हैं उसमें
पंख फैलाये
चाँद नीला है
आकाश में डूबे किसी लंगर की तरह
और मेरा वादा है उस से, जब मिलूंगा अगली बार
तो अपनी सबसे प्यारी किताब से कुछ पढ़कर सुनाऊंगा उसे
श श श
अभी मत बताना उसे
की आकाश और समुद्र दोनों से गहरी
और नीले चाँद से ज्यादा रूपहली उसकी आँखों को पढना ही
मुझे सबसे अच्छा लगता है
sky is nothing
but an ocean deep
and birds swim in it
with wings spread out
blue is the moon
like an anchor dropped in this heavenly sea
and i've promised, when i meet her next
will read her some passages from my favorite book
shshsh
don't tell her yet
that deeper than the sky and the sea
and more beautiful than the shimmering moon
it is her eyes, that i love reading most
39 comments:
itni sundar.. itni romantic... u r totally awesome with romance as a genre.. sure u dont have to work hard.. there's enough of it in ur life :-)
Beautiful images... as you said you are a dreamweaver here you paint vivid images.. very well done man- OldmonkMGM
shshsh..... bahetareen andaaz se dil ki baat bayaan ki...bahut khoob...
you should just read the poem to her. and that's it. nothing more needs to be done. Love it adee :)
Very sweet!
Is this meant for an actual person?
wow! simply beautiful!
i like it (^_^)
am left all mushy and woandering (wondering and wandering) into thoughts unwelcome right now...
those who are visiting for the first time, welcome to delhidreams :)
howdy: lol there's dee in my life na :)
oldmonk: thanks buddy
khushi: shukriya ji :)
pallavi: i did dat last night. n she was overjoyed :) n u know wat, i wrote it after watching 'notting hill' last night :)
meera: thanks. yes it is :) she is :D
milana: hehe thanks.
shh...itni achi poetry sirji..beautiful lines!!
the eyes tantalize, the eyes mesmerize. as the poison settles down, you begin to dream, and you promise you'd write about this, what do you call it? day dream? how abt delhidreams? aah..fits! :-)
woohoo...
#awesomeness
Keep it going man ...
you rock
Hugs
nadhi
Loved it adeee...
your lines would make 1000s of stars shine in those "deeper than the sky and the sea, and more beautiful than the shimmering moon" eyes...
@shamz911
Beautiful! I love the way you paint a picture and tell a story within a few lines..:)
yeh kavita nahi mutthi bhar khwaab hain...khoobsoorat khwaab.
beautiful! u sure are madly in love :) ... -manushee
so beautiful! love it
Sunte hain ke mil jaati hai Har Cheeez Duaaa Se...
Ek Roz tumhe Maaang ke Dekheinge Khudaaa Se...
Har cheez ho sakti nahi shabdon mein bayaan,
humse poocho, yeh din-e-aasmaan mein ek tara bhi hai.
bahut khoobsoorat hai dost...
priyaa
harish
translate kyun karta hai... stupid/... hindi vaali achi hai... bahut dino se you havent written anything on ur blog...
चाँद नीला है
आकाश में डूबे किसी लंगर की तरह
और मेरा वादा है उस से, जब मिलूंगा अगली बार
तो अपनी सबसे प्यारी किताब से कुछ पढ़कर सुनाऊंगा उसे
my favourite bit.
Ah! Lovely .....
I admire the way you weave such beautiful thoughts in few words ...
Beautiful and simple- yet so romantic
Now totally apt for the song...
Main shayar to nahi, magar aie haseen jabse dekha maine tujhko mujhko shaiyari aa gayi.....
Man very beautifully written...
Don't waste this one on guys like us Put a dedication for the one it i meant to be :-)
Adi
It's perfect, I love it. xoxo
rahul: thank u sir ji :)
ashu: i red ur comment n clickd ur name in anticipation of an engaging blog. but there was none. why? don't u write or u don't want to write? or u want to keep ur writing hidden from our prying eyes :)
nadhiya: ths sounds more close than tiger :) but am slightly intrigued at ur comment :)
shamz: thanks for d beautiful comment dost :) *hugs*
bhavna: m glad to have u here. u r one of most favorite bloggers :D a celebrity in my book!!!
MB: or shud i say saurabh? khoobsurat khwabon se chun chun k ye ghonsle sajaye hain seepiyon ke...ab intejaar hai us ek boond ka jo moti khilayegi inmein
abcd: hehe. yes, woh toh i am :) but why can't i access ur profile?
partywithneha: thanks. m glad u liked it :)
aham: beautiful beautiful comment. n thn u say ur hindi is bad :P
hagrid: kyonki tu kabhi help nahi karti isliye khud karna padta hai stupid :P thanks *aa gale lag ja* :D
sigma: aha! aaj eid ka chand bhi hamare yahan aa hi gaya :) shukriya shalini
raji: just like u raji. thanks :)
prats: don't worry buddy. it was meant for her, sent to her and then shared here :D thanks for visiting delhidreams.
blue: oh m so happy to have u here. i so love u blue :) thanks thanks thanks *hugs*
The two poems kursiyan, bhasha gave me all gyan regarding your intense poetry and this one no different! someone had rightly pointed out tht you are too good with romance...but each and every poem is a gem in its own way :):)
---pragyamodi
soft and delicate...chu gaya dil ko!!
pragya: thanks for visiting delhidreams. and for the generous comments :)
uma: dhanyavad sir ji :)
So beautiful, so exquisite! The poem takes one soaring into that ocean that is the sky!
My fave bit:
अभी मत बताना उसे
की आकाश और समुद्र दोनों से गहरी
और नीले चाँद से ज्यादा रूपहली उसकी आँखों को पढना ही
मुझे सबसे अच्छा लगता है
Thank you also for the English version!
Liked it a lot! :) usually i dont read poems but this one was nice.
Wow!
Nahi batayenge ke aapko kisi ki aankhon ko padna accha lagta hai, parr humein shak hai ke unhe pehle se pata hai ;)
GBU
Arti
wow beautiful write..
i just read the english transcript... sooo lovely..
very creative...
loved the last line the most...
hyper cute...
its very beautiful adiiiiiiii
:)
Nice ya... I loved the firs para...
Bahut sundar, bahut he sundar. :-)
Bahut dino baad kuch achha mila padhne ko. Dee is so lucky to have such a romantic moron ! :P
My fav lines are same as Shadows.
a)I am hungry for poems
b)I dont know much of HINDI
c)I find it so so difficult to write poems with theme as love
you are such a sweetheart for having translated the poem in English also!Loved the Hindi part though..:)
have just given a cursory glance at your blog..I shall return to read more from you :)
..and u said that u dont write poems! well.. which is the original one.. hindi or english?
kira: thanks for visiting delhidreams. i visited ur blog n found d poems so beautiful dat i bookmarked u straight away :)
cheth: hehe thanks buddy. i really liked ur 'Cheth Stuidos' blog.
arti: lol ye shaq nahi, yakin hai, aapka bhi aur unka bhi :D
arun: thank you arun. u also write well. i believe u shud post more often :)
nihar: thanks SF. long time? take care :)
nik: chalo kisi ko to first para pasand aaya :) thanks for visiting delhidreams.
cuckoo: lol d incorrigible cuckdoockoo. loved ur comment. bust dat also means, u hav not been reading much these days ;)
pai: i always try and translate my poems in English for my non-Hindi speaking friends. its another thng dat d results r more or less horrible ;) thanks for d feedback. waiting for ur comments on other poems too. tc.
sam: hehe. Hindi is d original. thanks sammie :)
sundar :)
Oye Adee.. I always knew you were a romantic from the poems you wrote par how much I knew now! :) What a poem re! Beautiful! :D
bahut sundar shabdon mein pyar ko byan kiya hai...
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