Tuesday, March 16, 2010

night / raat

वो आई
और साफ़ कर गयी
आकाश की सतह पर
बिखरे हुए थे
उड़ते से टुकड़े कई


she came
and cleaned up
crumbs
fallen, flying
on the surface of the sky

8 comments:

starry said...

lovely!

How do we know said...

beautiful! this is the second gud piece that i have read on ur blog in the recent past.

You rock!

Simply Poet said...

short and sweet !!

Nikita Banerjee said...

I like it. Simple yet says a lot! :)

香蕉哥哥 said...

thx u very much, i learn a lot

human being said...

such an original image!

you mean day is untidy?
making a mess?

and night sweeps the flying crumbs under the carpet, eh?

:D

Lethe said...

I really enjoyed this poem . . .

the image of crumbs and the sky is very powerful, one small, the other immense . . . beautiful work, great imagery.

Lethe

serendipity said...

loved raat
excellent poetry

dreamt before

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