beautiful! this is the second gud piece that i have read on ur blog in the recent past. You rock!
short and sweet !!
I like it. Simple yet says a lot! :)
thx u very much, i learn a lot
such an original image!you mean day is untidy?making a mess?and night sweeps the flying crumbs under the carpet, eh?:D
I really enjoyed this poem . . .the image of crumbs and the sky is very powerful, one small, the other immense . . . beautiful work, great imagery.Lethe
loved raatexcellent poetry
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