Friday, June 18, 2010

कब होता है

जो हम चाहें कब होता है
सब पा जायें, कब होता है

चलते चलते बीतें उम्रें
दर आ जाये, कब होता है

पोथे-पत्री कर्म-काण्ड में
रब मिल जाये, कब होता है

जीवन हो चाहे कितना लम्बा
मौत न आये, कब होता है

दौलत-डिग्री-ओहदे देखें
दिल दिख जाये, कब होता है

खुद को भूलूँ, है आसाँ लेकिन
तू याद न आये, कब होता है

अच्छा हो या बुरा हो लम्हा
बीत न जाये, कब होता है

42 comments:

Ankit Chadha said...

bahut khoob..

especially this couplet
दौलत-डिग्री-ओहदे देखें
दिल दिख जाये, कब होता है

Siddharth said...

good stuff .. write more often. flow bana rahega. tumhara bhi, humara bhi.

baavriviti said...

i love this one :)

Prats said...

Awesome bro!!! Takes a bow

I wish I could hear this with some music....

Aryaman said...

wah wah wah wah !!!

tum ek lamha bhi yaad na aao, ye kab hota hai,
har aah mein tumhara naam na nikle,ye kab hota hai...
din-raat tumhari yaadein na sataayein, ye kab hota hai..
tum ek awaaz mein paas aa jao, ye kab hota hai.

reena... said...

nice one..
loved it..
simply put..

Vivek said...

सुबह से शाम तक कॉलेज के बाहर चाय की चुस्कियां

मगर तेरा दीदार हो जाए, कब होता है.

Awesome loved it :)

Surubhi said...

Adee...I love this especially the last stanza....thats life, where nothing lasts forever :)

Neelabh said...

Awesome one. Loved it :)

Bilkul sahi kaha bhai, pothi patre mein kahan bhagwan milta hai..

Anonymous said...

That was so potent.. How tragically true.. I guess tragic isn't the sentiment there but the degree to which it's convincing is very high.

Esp. the last couplet. About moments, good or bad.. beet na jaye, kab hota hai.. wow.. really wow.

:)

Reema Sahay said...

Superb! Simple and yet beautiful. It made me nostalgic about when I used to write poetry. Looks like should revisit.

How do we know said...

Adee.. this is among the best poetry i have read in a long time. and pieces like this dont deserve huge words of praise. their presence is its own statement.

* મારી રચના * said...

kabhi kabar hota hain..... like it...keep it up Adee...

Anonymous said...

aise sunder shabd, dil ko na bhaayein .. kab hota hai ??

:))

simple n sweet :)

harshita s said...

humara bhi yehi sawal hai

bahaut khoobsurt hai :)
keep writing
Regards
Harshita

Sudeep B said...

nice...
after a long time might i add...

serendipity said...

tum kuchh likho/ mai na padhun
kab hota hai

starry said...

Hey! where is the translation:(

Anonymous said...

Main comment na karu, aisa kab hota hai?! :D

Very simple, yet very nice :)

Simply Poet said...

this is just too good man..I mean publish your nazams/poems/ghazals whatever you call them ..they are gems

ani_aset said...

achcha likha hai :)

Richa said...

B'ful :) loved the line daulat dekhe degree dekhe dil dikh jayein kab hota hai..

heropm said...

Too good mate.. :-) Liked the last three sections of the gazal.

from this, onwards:

दौलत-डिग्री-ओहदे देखें
दिल दिख जाये, कब होता है

Keep coming up with more. :-)

sidharth said...

Very well written bro - keep 'em coming !
Love it..

Harish said...

bahut door ki soch hai tumari,
hhumaari soch toh kam pad jaati hai..

:) lovely lovely post

Phoenix said...

That really very good...ka sar

Anonymous said...

Very well written! Loved it, keep up the great work!

Srushti Rao said...

Awesomeness!!!!

Milte hai yun logo se hum
tum mil jao, kab hota hai

Sowie couldnt stop adding a coupla lines...

Loved the whole thing... really!!! Cheers!

Renji said...

Nice one Adee...first time reading something from you...

Aniirban Bose said...

Behtareen

Amrita said...

हम कुछ कहें ..... और आप समझ जायें ..... ये कब होता हे

Beautiful adee... liked it !

Prabhjotk said...

so real.... :)

The Storyteller said...

Good to read something from you after a long time :)

Awesome lines!


GBU
Arti

baavriviti said...

here it is :)

achcha ho ya bura ho lamha
beet na jaaye, kab hota hai

din mein jab tak na milun usse
sukoon aa jaaye, kab hota hai

katra katra muskurahat chhalke
poori mil jaaye, kab hota hai

daastan likh dun kayamat ki
kalam ruk jaaye, kab hota hai

jawaab maanga ho gar adee ne,
'viti' bhool jaaye, kab hota hai? ;)

KAUNDH - sparking of inner feelings said...

Tu achha na likh paye
ye kab hota hai:)

The Storyteller said...

Good to read something from you after a long time :)

Awesome lines!


GBU
Arti

Anonymous said...

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Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) said...

lovely... simple and sweet... cheers!
Tavish
Blog: Sensible Bakwas

Anand Shukla said...

i have been writing for long time but the nascent thoughts said in the most simple form...i like ur style(you give a reflection of me)

Tanmi Gold said...

Jo jab hona hain, tabhi hotha hain.:-)
Good thoughts, nicely expressed.

ADITI said...

wow!!! simply awesome adee...
tum likho aur hume accha na lage ,
kab hota hai :) :) i loved it adee :)simply put yet superb!! :)

deepika said...

tum kuch likho aur pasand na aaye,
kab hota hai :)

Special kudos for this couplet:
"खुद को भूलूँ, है आसाँ लेकिन
तू याद न आये, कब होता है"

Keep scribbling...

dreamt before

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