जो हम चाहें कब होता है
सब पा जायें, कब होता है
चलते चलते बीतें उम्रें
दर आ जाये, कब होता है
पोथे-पत्री कर्म-काण्ड में
रब मिल जाये, कब होता है
जीवन हो चाहे कितना लम्बा
मौत न आये, कब होता है
दौलत-डिग्री-ओहदे देखें
दिल दिख जाये, कब होता है
खुद को भूलूँ, है आसाँ लेकिन
तू याद न आये, कब होता है
अच्छा हो या बुरा हो लम्हा
बीत न जाये, कब होता है
41 comments:
bahut khoob..
especially this couplet
दौलत-डिग्री-ओहदे देखें
दिल दिख जाये, कब होता है
good stuff .. write more often. flow bana rahega. tumhara bhi, humara bhi.
i love this one :)
Awesome bro!!! Takes a bow
I wish I could hear this with some music....
wah wah wah wah !!!
tum ek lamha bhi yaad na aao, ye kab hota hai,
har aah mein tumhara naam na nikle,ye kab hota hai...
din-raat tumhari yaadein na sataayein, ye kab hota hai..
tum ek awaaz mein paas aa jao, ye kab hota hai.
nice one..
loved it..
simply put..
सुबह से शाम तक कॉलेज के बाहर चाय की चुस्कियां
मगर तेरा दीदार हो जाए, कब होता है.
Awesome loved it :)
Adee...I love this especially the last stanza....thats life, where nothing lasts forever :)
Awesome one. Loved it :)
Bilkul sahi kaha bhai, pothi patre mein kahan bhagwan milta hai..
That was so potent.. How tragically true.. I guess tragic isn't the sentiment there but the degree to which it's convincing is very high.
Esp. the last couplet. About moments, good or bad.. beet na jaye, kab hota hai.. wow.. really wow.
:)
Superb! Simple and yet beautiful. It made me nostalgic about when I used to write poetry. Looks like should revisit.
Adee.. this is among the best poetry i have read in a long time. and pieces like this dont deserve huge words of praise. their presence is its own statement.
kabhi kabar hota hain..... like it...keep it up Adee...
aise sunder shabd, dil ko na bhaayein .. kab hota hai ??
:))
simple n sweet :)
humara bhi yehi sawal hai
bahaut khoobsurt hai :)
keep writing
Regards
Harshita
nice...
after a long time might i add...
tum kuchh likho/ mai na padhun
kab hota hai
Hey! where is the translation:(
Main comment na karu, aisa kab hota hai?! :D
Very simple, yet very nice :)
this is just too good man..I mean publish your nazams/poems/ghazals whatever you call them ..they are gems
achcha likha hai :)
B'ful :) loved the line daulat dekhe degree dekhe dil dikh jayein kab hota hai..
Too good mate.. :-) Liked the last three sections of the gazal.
from this, onwards:
दौलत-डिग्री-ओहदे देखें
दिल दिख जाये, कब होता है
Keep coming up with more. :-)
Very well written bro - keep 'em coming !
Love it..
bahut door ki soch hai tumari,
hhumaari soch toh kam pad jaati hai..
:) lovely lovely post
That really very good...ka sar
Very well written! Loved it, keep up the great work!
Awesomeness!!!!
Milte hai yun logo se hum
tum mil jao, kab hota hai
Sowie couldnt stop adding a coupla lines...
Loved the whole thing... really!!! Cheers!
Nice one Adee...first time reading something from you...
Behtareen
हम कुछ कहें ..... और आप समझ जायें ..... ये कब होता हे
Beautiful adee... liked it !
so real.... :)
Good to read something from you after a long time :)
Awesome lines!
GBU
Arti
here it is :)
achcha ho ya bura ho lamha
beet na jaaye, kab hota hai
din mein jab tak na milun usse
sukoon aa jaaye, kab hota hai
katra katra muskurahat chhalke
poori mil jaaye, kab hota hai
daastan likh dun kayamat ki
kalam ruk jaaye, kab hota hai
jawaab maanga ho gar adee ne,
'viti' bhool jaaye, kab hota hai? ;)
Tu achha na likh paye
ye kab hota hai:)
Good to read something from you after a long time :)
Awesome lines!
GBU
Arti
lovely... simple and sweet... cheers!
Tavish
Blog: Sensible Bakwas
i have been writing for long time but the nascent thoughts said in the most simple form...i like ur style(you give a reflection of me)
Jo jab hona hain, tabhi hotha hain.:-)
Good thoughts, nicely expressed.
wow!!! simply awesome adee...
tum likho aur hume accha na lage ,
kab hota hai :) :) i loved it adee :)simply put yet superb!! :)
tum kuch likho aur pasand na aaye,
kab hota hai :)
Special kudos for this couplet:
"खुद को भूलूँ, है आसाँ लेकिन
तू याद न आये, कब होता है"
Keep scribbling...
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