Thursday, September 09, 2010

झूठ / the lie

अभी-अभी
तुझसे झूठ बोल कर हटा हूँ मैं
नींद का बहाना बना
फ़ोन रखवाया ही है तेरा

सच तो ये है
के नींद भरी थी तेरी आवाज़ में
और मुझे भी है इंतज़ार तेरे सोने का

जब सो जाएगी तू
तो चाँद की खिड़की से तुझे रात भर निहारूंगा


have just
lied to you love
feigning sleep
asked you to keep the phone down

the truth is
brimming with sleep, your voice was
and i too was waiting
for you to doze off

because when you do
fall asleep
i'll watch you the whole night
from moon, that window steep

20 comments:

shadows said...

I have a very important question for you.... why do you men always do that!!!???

harshita s said...

Beautiful, can see lots of Love in these lines :)

Regards
Harshita

Vidya said...

This is just so lovely, Adee.

Nikita Banerjee said...

I don't care if no one agrees...but this was the best post to me! Sigh...//dreamy eyes// :P

Neelabh said...

So true!! Beautiful poem, loved it :)

ADITI said...

it is always true.... and yeah guys usually do that :) and its written so beautifully ^_^

ani_aset said...

i dunno why the word phone doesn do justice to such a beautiful feeling? :)

Vivek said...

par problem yeh hai ki jhooth ke peeche ki sachai koi nahi samjhna chahta

penandpaper said...

Mindblowing! The lines are brimming with love :-) It's wonderful reading your poetry once in a while and it certainly inspire me to get back to poetry.

baavriviti said...

beautiful. made me sad too.

kabhi aisa haal apna bhi hota tha
aaj kal woh khidki band karke sote hain...

Adee said...

shadows: hahaha not always my dear :D

harshu: thanks :)

vidya: thanks Vidya, next time i'll aks you to give me a beautiful pic to post with some other poem of mine :)

niki: hehe thanks but why the :P ? :)

neelabh: shukriya bhaijan :)

aditi: no no aditi, do not generalize guys/men here please :) thanks for the comment, both here and on fbuk!

ani: the answer to this is coming in a poem soon :) thanks for the comment.

vivek: very true brother :) thanks for reading it so deeply!

penandpaper: thanks a lot for your generous words :) visited ur blog, liked what u wrote. so, please do put pen to paper more often :)

viti: hmmm, i didn't think it'll have this effect, but yes, it was always a possibility. get over it woman, chaand muskurayega wahan bhi, jaldi hi :)

Gillian said...

such beauty...thank you!
xo

maddie said...

l
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v
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Nikita Banerjee said...

What why? Accha hai...bahut accha hai!

Adee said...

gillian: thank u dear blue :)

maddie: hey, u r back! thanks and keep visiting! :)

niki: hehe why because u added a :p in ur last comment! samjhi?

Rain Girl said...

Love, love, love this poem.... beautiful, romantic & hindi poetry... came here for the first time.. and will keep coming again :)

Adee said...

thanks Rain Girl :) hope you do keep visiting. waise bhi, i love rains a lot :)

serendipity said...

Shades of Gulzaar ....
adee:)
पर सच तो ये है
कि
मुझे तुम्हारे अल्फाज़
यूँ ही अच्छे लगते हैं!

ज़रुरत नहीं
किसीऔर के शीशे में
अपने आप को तराशने की

Adee said...

serendipity: ji nahi, maine kabhi koshish nahi ki ki mukhe gulzar jaisa samjha jaye, abhi to apni us 'voice' ki talash jaari hai :)

karnika said...

Dis is nt good 1st u men put down da phone n den justify it b'fuly
nice poem :)

dreamt before

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