शीशे के सामने बैठीं तुम
और तुम्हारे बाल बनाता मैं
बातें करते
कुछ नया सीखते
ज़िन्दगी बांटते
कितना कुछ, सुलझाते जाते हम
और तुम्हारे बाल बनाता मैं
बातें करते
कुछ नया सीखते
ज़िन्दगी बांटते
कितना कुछ, सुलझाते जाते हम
little, simple, everyday things are much more important than yearly celebrations and shopping trips to the mall. sadly, we don't realise this often. this poem saves one such moment about life, for life...
in front of the mirror you sit
a comb through your hair i flit
talking
learning
sharing
untangling life, bit by bit
image copyright Chandrasekhar Acharya
25 comments:
Great poem!!!
you've said so much in such simple words :) will try not to forget this lesson, both in poem writing and in relationships. thank you once again sir ji ;)
bahut umda
Simple, sweet, and meaningful! :-)
Naaaice!!
Simple and Sweet... Nice one :)
haiku style? simple and beautiful. :) keep writing
Subtle yet filled with meaning. Its like the popular saying..Life is what happens when we're busy making plans. Nice one! :)
just 1 word -> beautiful :)
Oscar was wrong, you are fascinating and a good poet.
Very cozy! :) I love your pic on the header!
Simple yet very expressive. Bahut Khoob
its beautiful!
Lovely Adee :)
very sweetly put :)
like the simplicity of the lines and the great feeling it conveyed
as we love one another
We learn about life
And ourselves
One strand at a time
We are all connected
Short and true - I like
'untangling life, bit by bit'
dil khush ho gaya padh k... can i post this poem on my blog under the title.. 'guest post'???
very very very awesome indeed!!!
thanks guys. for coming over and sharing ur time with me n these words.
Yoli: :) maybe he was right.
Niki: thanks. that's the 'one' :)
Citizen of Earth: yes, we are all connected and the more i know you - the other, the more i know my self :)
Parv: yes u can. but u'll have to link it back to this page. thnks.
yes sure of course!!! thnx man!
It is the quiet reflective and simple moments that make a life.
To be fully immersed in the now.
Combing the hair, how divine.
xoxo
now what should be written, a lot already been taken up :D
grt poetry... !
char line ki kavita likhte ho, woh bhi beautician ke upar, uspe itne comments kyon aate hai :P
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