Friday, April 09, 2010

search / खोज

a dear friend and erudite blogger, posted this delicate poem 'Underground' on her blog:

"If you stay underground too long
I’ll send poems to seek you out"

do read the complete poem here:

inspired by her, n m so glad that she messaged me to visit her page, i wrote this poem. hope you'll like it.

अगर तुम छुपी रहोगी ज्यादा देर
मैं खोजने के लिए तुम्हें, कवितायेँ भेजूंगा अपनी
फिर चाहे तुम छुपी हो सागर में, आकाश में
या पृथ्वी के किसी अबूझे कोने में
ये कवितायेँ ढूंढ ही लेंगी तुम्हें
जैसे सपने ढूंढ लेते हैं आँखों को
जैसे पंछी, ढूंढ लेते हैं आसमानों को

if you'll stay hidden for long
i'll send my poems to seek you out
then, even if you are hidden in the sea or the sky
or in some unsolved corner of the earth
find you will, these poems of mine
like, dreams find the eyes
like birds find the skies


Accidental Fame Junkie said...

Hey adee, thanks so much! Coming from a poet, that is a compliment! I like the way your poems takes off from where mine ends. Love it!


starry said...

Nice poem.will visit your friends site also.Thanks for sharing.

Aman Sharma said...

Good one!

Poetry is like music really...both have the power to connect people, hearts and minds! This small piece brings this out beautifully!

Twitter id : @amancool5

oceanic mirages said...

jo kho jae use dhoondna asaan hota hai...
jo paas ho use kho dena bhi asaan hota hai...
par jo paas ho kar kho jae use dhoond pana...
shayad bohat mushkil hota hai.

baavriviti said...

beautiful. i love it when poems are so good that i can not just read them, but feel them. your friends writes really well too. :)

Ire said...

Love the last two lines too much! "Like the dreams find the eyes..."


Nice piece of work Adee, Gudone...!!

Keep writing :-)

Ko said...

sirjee Ghazab :)

Simply Poet said...

waah isse kehte hai

D Writer said... have greatly improved upon the original offense to the original piece

dreamt before

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